【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: k& k9 U( e8 {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
) n. C8 I9 k! r4 ~We meet and talk everyday,
0 P9 c# ?/ l, M6 M3 b. QBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 x5 j* r1 L/ r' r) f7 H) {If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# }1 O4 D" x2 H5 B. [& @0 rI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ S, H4 ^, {5 I, K" T* rWhy is it so difficult to express?
: C) k: \7 T! H) J0 `3 e0 {I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: w( D; N4 F! E) ?2 h! Y; Q' tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 \0 Q3 ^# [+ S2 gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
0 a% z( n7 T3 K  tWhy is it so difficult to express?
# C; E8 `& S" x) h. T0 {3 X! U* qI want to confess that I love you,
  Q9 N8 P7 p2 i6 ?1 K7 |7 yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: @; g. t/ t$ e- iIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 F4 f% m7 s' {7 b3 O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 }8 U( [* \; X# ^<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 L5 s* [  ]: m: K1 j<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 N' h+ h6 j* b3 v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 @: c- _  i& S9 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  }& l* e; i$ S' G<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: T- X7 E& g% v6 I6 e0 F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# x' o9 k) O. Q* r, l7 \3 K9 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
. E, [; X5 U+ z3 K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& C8 T' n8 ?9 R% J1 o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# a& O: m) x4 K2 q/ x' i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 ~* ~( h) O( \- G# |1 R) d<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  ^4 O( D8 `* b6 Q+ o<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
  n/ |7 U: c, ^6 d" M8 F( I; a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 Y5 N: ?2 Q: C7 f! L( {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 ?0 b7 Y& P  u: K3 o* j0 l. }* x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) v* A+ L4 b9 H) T! H& q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. B- O# y( L5 T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 T) e0 A- o0 g" D+ C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" j6 k8 g/ e% R4 Q' R8 X+ J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* J& L2 ^3 [' _+ {! u( s<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
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<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, G" A: r' c) v: I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 u0 _) n' ?! A' Q% b. u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ N/ U- O, m% G- w* E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, K# y( N' u, g+ Z7 m4 ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 |7 F+ A$ x6 r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 D: _/ L6 [6 c9 |5 s$ P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# ^( I3 ]% @5 I5 ?/ W5 F* ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>