【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; c3 C% N. a  F% L7 sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; W4 ^8 E5 t% G$ K$ s* X$ e, F  h% mWe meet and talk everyday,
6 c- ~8 A1 y  c. ^& A6 SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: L# a  c. K8 c" WIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; C* _, i* Y+ u; LI would probably know how you feel
1 {" Y7 p& N# n) U& ]. DLove… just the word love
3 N4 V# P& s* n+ ~, A( S/ w# vWhy is it so difficult to express?
, X% |9 j2 J) `( _; rI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! g" x7 b' l  I# g$ J& IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. h1 B/ G5 f: w% Q' xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( y9 a9 i5 B9 `& CI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 ^+ K5 C6 j  T( Z6 KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
& n' ], M  A+ Y( U7 HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. A# p- z9 D/ C0 C1 H3 q9 Y: CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Z3 n/ J( W0 H0 g+ |# p0 XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) T! O6 ]+ s5 {, q3 R% C! |. k; g4 ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  d2 x) R1 V# E$ F4 w  T<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) y  W0 \5 |3 n8 _<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ p4 n/ x2 G) o# j/ N& y! a* u% p4 \<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ f5 m; f. V; _8 F- I<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: M' N1 K1 h- w5 Y) f/ r<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 S" c& s' W7 _. n6 F/ P$ x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 \& ?6 G& G/ M* L<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 [) t' Y2 g$ f$ u2 c& @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ ?, e5 W2 R& M9 s3 A1 T7 W  a: {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 m" k- w  f: w5 W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ J8 P  F; y- \8 [/ W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ P" [" k6 G2 Q( d8 w" u" p' C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ l- V- O# M: e* Q! i, q  ^1 Z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. g, z( E8 b0 `9 T5 y, J% Y; F<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 K% p4 b3 p0 z% t5 ]<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 F) X% K3 Y, U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# j9 E/ r9 I. F, t0 F<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ t6 ]. `+ {* D9 D5 i; ~1 R% p1 e6 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
& n& d; W- W5 f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 n5 F% y/ x. V6 c: W2 K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( m4 ]7 h5 O& @$ B: Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 k- o# x$ _; `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! q# U7 T& W* k  H0 c" h2 O<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 q! e/ h: i3 B- V4 u( A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 q9 j. u& k9 K: \9 l. F<P>But I never did </P>
6 Q! C% \; }# y& I<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ S& h, ~* ^% z( S2 ]; V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 s2 N9 s' E' \" h, m& A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; G7 r4 g( G. B+ |" ^  Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 d) P% o6 S$ U( a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 t0 ^3 ]3 T. d$ `<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 d5 F, [0 g6 f% y: [- e6 P" V<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* p) h! ?" o* {% N' c$ W/ A& U  Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  k( Y2 n& q; K- R2 T/ ]% E  h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 j  z5 `  N) D, [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>