【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" W$ s& V3 J8 {) X# x$ h9 hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) ?5 G* [* j; D8 B6 `  NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 d/ U5 x  @4 Q2 w5 k) Z" ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 S) \5 ]9 a1 wI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ c+ @1 e5 }; h3 g" ?5 gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  @. Z( G- @/ M' n$ ?; UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  D& `3 G9 t. j. Q9 {Can I entrust it to you?
$ |. _) p4 p, p, ]' Z8 ~Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  E) ^9 C. B7 ?6 z7 uI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  H) n+ I9 e% r& u! bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- Y, C! }$ C: W# JIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 Q# \. N' h7 P' k0 GCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 O' h4 x7 b8 J) {/ A" k* M3 r+ O8 qEntrust my love within your heart

% n8 x1 L+ S6 P/ K  E& d+ @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* d& r. `: G$ v9 p' K<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! H8 f4 J0 d9 |: d2 e# d1 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 |- |! N/ n' y; {9 ~, ]% q' z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 p8 M! g3 I7 F/ t6 z" _0 C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
% W$ T' Z. r3 r* g; p& M' S% j$ ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# c2 s7 f6 {- ]& d: B<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 q8 g* c* h8 S$ b& j. u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 W: L' |2 \& r* k/ k<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
& Q7 {( s0 I2 p" H" [7 E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ o' S1 |- x) X' z4 j  A4 ~2 s$ e! {<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 k1 O9 p0 X# d<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. e. X; a3 l$ V/ y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% I+ }1 |: ]/ N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 }& ?4 F1 Z# ~) p3 X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: B% N# f# o2 O- a( {) E<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. u4 {9 H+ v0 |' h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' L9 w. D% x  X8 @+ a<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* }+ X  \/ I* t) e5 l<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( r8 S. y2 N0 U+ `2 p/ H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# f4 B4 o. ]1 }* w' T, b, r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 ~2 d0 r2 |( P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 g2 e* _( ~( r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ U2 ]0 H. q- m. x, M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% {! `5 {2 C. P* ?<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& O/ G* \" X+ t, F5 p6 B4 A<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 I. A  v) i+ H& `$ D4 ]) m: {<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 a. O" p7 v! I<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, y+ s7 @* K# S! J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 j/ h7 T7 D( L. s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* s4 q1 b3 O: k  [% Y" d  V<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>