【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' X0 c* a0 g- I, h2 g* O3 g6 b我另将歌词附在此。
/ I2 f) X7 x2 ]% g4 E+ X. rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 T8 d* U0 o8 J6 u. ^* xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 `& b4 q0 Z5 D4 XFrom the first moment we met,
7 n2 G- i4 |& a& I9 B$ B( y$ C7 UI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 p- g1 L( d: \) ^) YI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
  ~/ g3 A  U$ D. q: PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  F4 f% i0 a! l; v3 ?Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& z) M" ]% o# l# ?- P7 K' FBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 v7 q% m& T  PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) W! F3 O$ q# @, @; @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 z( I* g# ~$ R8 h4 [; nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ u" V8 L# ?3 K4 M% ~Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ Q2 k& W5 `% T2 I: C; r8 S[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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# M: m8 {. s: [2 e; I: q8 ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  E) @- j( E: x) ?1 N) v" C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! s- [8 o3 E) a- P/ U( g7 R. w6 _<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 k4 ]  W2 \* l$ T3 K) Z% \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# u) p! G4 _" l8 Z- ~( [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ H5 ]# v* a3 _" D: `' J<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
  n! L! V0 W, x# m! C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
' v0 n$ i3 Q/ i3 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 H6 b! I) a9 b<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 Y5 J5 Q: x. r' e' t<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. i' I4 [3 H' V0 R4 j  I+ l/ J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# K  @; [# Q3 c. Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) q" z* r! z9 w) P. Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& b& _# \3 S% R. f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# o. n! o5 s9 \4 f% B$ m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  n' }, B" \, D+ x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 T  i' r3 a5 f9 ~) u  P1 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* z! m% q' S, K. K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% X: ?) d+ |2 a2 y6 w% ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* d  c- k6 y" _9 p& x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ L. @7 W: Q+ R4 g1 s2 ?<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 j% R1 y, p9 m% |7 P6 R0 M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 B6 m6 J, {# m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' m& o$ V: t5 o# |0 o, X* A<P>但我不会 </P>
7 K6 r7 \+ z/ H' V/ ]<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ p  C! i% ^( v3 s' S1 M<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 q1 C  }8 a7 w* _7 g  s: }( V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 E; t9 `/ V  M2 V+ @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 G3 Y; p, S1 y" R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. ]3 q( k* ^% j# L8 Y4 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ O- e' {3 K9 s6 t5 c, Z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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' H4 l' Y' V0 B& J7 _) |这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' y( d  w: P) F) k; y! `- n这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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