【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ P+ t( }- |1 k- `% [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) w; }0 u. H! h( I% ]9 x  {' T$ JFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 V, U7 X, K- M6 SBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  Q$ L' u5 f+ s6 W. }" rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# o& @2 B5 L) @' [. ]4 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 V' A5 Q+ U9 I1 S% u+ oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 j% X0 k, T: M# ^0 [# FWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 P, a8 Q2 a5 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' r+ {- L7 f% q$ c7 v) S% fCan I entrust it to you?
' a, W# p- E' m) @Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& [3 z; D' i6 U& LEntrust my love within your heart
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, L/ l. S. J; u% u# ^& E" n" E' b$ Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* c( x2 B9 ?( ~; d0 ^! v$ u<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 }$ K. H8 |8 G) j* @% x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# N1 P' }; \  J5 v' s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
8 }0 g% G9 M% H3 Z* |# m  \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* r/ R' |' _$ Y2 z<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' G9 H: r: ]9 S4 E7 I) L, p" P8 J$ a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" \  x$ P6 r& C) y: X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% I. K* i- v5 n' D4 e( c5 n, X<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ ?/ O6 w) D5 x" g. _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. e: \3 H8 z0 }7 V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  i: C% ^# v8 e+ v/ h8 L' V<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 G0 d( ~/ ]; {0 y. N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
$ `$ w* b" @& r; r<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 B4 j+ J7 m! Y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! k' D& m2 j% O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- _( N% H$ W4 F# S5 Z3 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& H  ~7 w$ W; p0 w# W. W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ B$ z: Q% ~% u+ g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 `1 F' }" Z5 y) X/ A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) z  J" @1 v  X+ N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! u( p: Q! X) F+ p, P$ `& o6 F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. m" I% {+ ~$ n/ `  G4 U( i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 O6 m4 n3 _& `- @& i  {) S<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# [' X$ T7 I8 z7 H' o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  G) o4 T# |2 j. U( F! C<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 _( q; N  ~* S& c  e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 _, Q4 U! {  \<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 p, i6 I1 j, z2 [0 \% X' s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* D, n, W' W8 q, F3 r9 h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. J- v: e" x& s5 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 H  O) w: T% [9 x0 h6 _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* ~7 v: O; ?' M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% u7 p2 g7 V: J; X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ s5 Z  k! k) p9 ]7 M$ B: u<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! K8 u0 ^: r& Q3 G2 U% n0 }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. N8 P+ ]+ ~0 q6 Q. j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

+ L( |: v4 _3 m, U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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& P1 p* u) y0 U<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ i" v& t' B) l+ v, b  k<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* |8 d9 H% {4 J8 m' n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>