【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( Y" V" b+ j- `* o8 }我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. f6 g& r( G: [! \" m4 ]% L: VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ N- m9 s2 ^: i8 u: m2 ~  v- a9 q: G, lI already loved you with all my heart
& B4 [: O6 b. V! F9 P$ }' _* vWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ v2 e+ u4 n/ F& ]- ]$ |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 j+ t$ c: k2 L" @I would probably know how you feel
& Y, o4 o( ~% `: d" e: o) ~* Q7 BLove… just the word love
" ]; U0 d) Q2 `" ]/ c: L7 `Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# w: A6 I" o3 ]" O& JIf today isn’t too late,
  u; W6 g0 o6 |! K+ GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 v7 \2 T: B0 h2 O# u( rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
* O# `: a! O; h: g# R* rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 _! i: {% F9 G& U4 T+ w% k4 u0 u) oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 n# Q) ?; R. G+ IIf today isn’t too late,
& p$ ?/ N' j, I6 R5 U$ wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  i/ k: d% j# x- c$ r1 I+ MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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/ I# G9 |$ U3 T: m+ B# V+ ]9 n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: U8 J1 N1 h' s; q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 R3 k6 z, d! _9 ?& I3 v$ ~, q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
" _! I3 F' L; t; P! ]& C0 o' [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  d! L! {4 D7 O3 I4 h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
  Z+ g( W8 T, c* P' h<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 L6 ~, P) J# R4 J' l* z/ q# p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% Z4 s0 ^& w* n* t- z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- ^% u$ i) X8 e1 X6 X7 f<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
5 ~5 t+ r2 M. ?* L<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! Q' V) h& I4 @3 m- J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 ]0 t5 ^% n3 B7 }0 \# d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. G' Z% Z$ m5 ?: U( n7 W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) _" N, s0 n& [2 k# {7 M6 _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  p* t* U- H; n+ Z2 h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 W2 x! i3 f" s5 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 e+ L3 N7 i& W# r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 A; R+ y3 h% Z) A# J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 j  t) G8 ?2 h' o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. L% Q' y' ?8 b6 I3 N; ~<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 F5 K$ G6 l( ]& R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* G2 f1 Y: P/ a! d. r- E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
5 N" E% s5 ?$ ~! Q$ W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 P( e9 [! P$ o) ?; G; z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 L; j' i1 Q- f. _  P% P, E, d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  B- }; v$ v& @% F3 ~3 @<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& C; I( N) Q+ y$ R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; l: T) }! Q# i: b4 F0 |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 T" f% \+ ]9 I5 X6 x+ w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  U3 h- j" T1 f# \+ k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 E* w& ]6 X6 x  z4 ^; W& `! `<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& o& W5 a( Q3 w3 Y/ ~这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, T3 G$ d. h% S3 R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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8 S' D8 ~: V: M4 q' A5 i( B$ u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>