【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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: h' A$ q& n" j: V. |3 {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 `& x8 C- p4 {: d+ S! y/ R( {; pWe meet and talk everyday,
8 ^5 D) W" C% y' YBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
# q: b! Q4 V: g' v' T8 pLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# }& N9 |5 Q8 g0 GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. v/ g, A8 W  Q0 ^/ A8 QOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 o7 j: P. D! n6 x. y, lIf today isn’t too late,
  R) k, B4 Y6 i7 b/ J! Y- R! TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* C( \- I/ y0 g* P$ l  BI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( J6 ]+ A; ]0 G/ z5 ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
: B1 C& G7 \8 w# M; S5 J# iWhy is it so difficult to express?
  ~, @  {5 M8 S8 ?# q6 kI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 z$ O6 a) S2 l" T) [9 UIf today isn’t too late,
/ }8 }% v9 e( fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
0 e$ k% j3 h3 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 j1 J/ R* T$ }8 vCan I entrust it to you?
; w* N6 Z( u) }. p  {+ O, E5 BEntrust my love within your heart
7 p3 ^  C2 c  s% YCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
( x5 E; u2 `2 t; c5 N5 ~' p<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- C" C; N- A# }9 a% e8 }& E7 u- D6 X8 ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ s2 {+ g* b# i) k& t: Z6 G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; \4 u# L+ p" {: c8 _+ R$ ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ i+ I. l6 J; k+ O/ V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 b& N8 X- Z9 \, o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' d% ^9 H) x) s( o<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* o# ?3 B5 _2 g1 i' x# m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" a4 Z+ [4 U# ^) R. J  |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 t9 j, _' H7 b  g( r; T& s+ K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# i6 m$ |+ T3 W* d<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 P% a8 @8 }$ |<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' ^6 R5 g  Q5 Q+ ~5 U5 N<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ H, C( F- l2 u1 ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* Z. k$ c/ L: `1 [<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ n* ]: c+ U2 I9 o2 }) i" P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
" }+ |; j, P# y* K2 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
9 P) V& D4 K; }6 S: i<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 H% Z' V" W7 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 n5 H% B6 P( w5 A/ S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& f4 H0 [! R+ g$ o2 I- \6 B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& W8 d5 }- L! m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' ^: S. U8 e5 V. {2 p" {8 j<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) r+ }8 r$ T( r  m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! v$ F. i# L9 K; ~# l) l# k9 M7 N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) A% z5 f# Z6 ?4 K; o<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 z3 l9 w9 x+ f1 o4 h0 K" X! g' d* Z<P>但我不会 </P>
2 |& h% X& i% }" Z2 n) m" I( J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( A" ^5 S+ Z# c1 L* ]1 b& R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 b4 F% C: S/ x8 L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 K$ ]% p" R6 [9 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 l+ x1 \. B8 y  e* C7 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 |4 M) X/ Y7 O/ f" U; D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# u" l9 v0 ~2 E+ I3 l<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ z9 X9 u& _$ k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ a; H# a/ o) ~& k4 \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 |+ s6 x$ o/ A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- i# N, L: I. R5 r, H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: v- \% E. i+ `8 R<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>