【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
; O1 `; f  L$ |From the first moment we met,
  l7 n: ?) S0 jI already loved you with all my heart
8 Q1 A( z! [7 K/ v8 w0 aWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; I( P) s5 @. `I would probably know how you feel
+ m5 S8 a& ?- |, {Love… just the word love
# ^& y( Z( a' j  HWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 @. ^! @+ g8 \6 V5 T  KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) t6 u3 s1 a% ^! O2 i  WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: }0 q5 y% S3 F5 @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 C  N; h! w; zLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 r/ ~& L4 e3 F, u" J! y9 s8 `But I never did
, ~; y; L$ ]1 r0 @One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, w- b) t* c. g2 b$ s2 `$ ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" [1 E0 s5 j" `, }0 b7 e4 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: o& g) k! G8 N$ wCan I entrust it to you?
4 N5 U( O7 l6 E, _1 }; cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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" T7 P# u2 N9 ~" I) W' ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ b1 T& E* B" L' _6 O* ^5 G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ g, F* H  z5 H! R- s1 d$ Y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 B# V: ^; v2 F, c# h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ o. y; s5 ~) D- q' k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; G$ e+ ?( E- i7 D- w5 T* F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) }& e) e$ n2 _  q3 S( E& ~# `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" }- h& a. N: S  U- v; }& [4 A1 S<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% I" z" H4 W/ z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* N( c3 O- A, f& }<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 M' g0 N7 A' X# N<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 ~; d+ w. A. Z" s* A3 y; K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ g$ H* }9 r, K3 A' c7 r# k. @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' y+ _& l9 x5 x7 D6 ]0 c<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 i1 U4 T/ j* }1 c$ c* q) ]0 m2 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 [7 p; u' M5 q& T- x0 L7 T. A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ U& h( L0 `6 y9 R: k# U2 I1 B: H<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- y6 c$ l1 |# ~  R/ ]) w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ x7 v7 ]: o8 Q  \) |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, x' a8 C! r. z* G% _4 d( P2 [/ K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 J0 g* @* P  L( g. W8 T3 l<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* C# ^1 c/ `5 e+ x7 |4 k<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" x5 P4 N; ]0 I7 x$ M3 E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ {$ c# Y0 L, c+ o" E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* {4 ?5 h" O' n7 `) X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 Y  O$ ^: I8 r* Z4 }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ r4 e4 @5 h3 s/ k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 F4 m5 p( @( r- O7 a<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- M) N( \* `# T5 U1 i7 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( A* L9 H: \/ s0 s; a: {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 `. \% p% L2 i% Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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" v  c( r5 v1 O( j1 m! t1 e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( G7 G+ s6 h, F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; q8 r$ g0 X# w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>