【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( _% G3 i! [* \* W% hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 m1 p* q; E* L8 C+ B  DWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) d. I! ]) W, T. i! ^, x1 |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% h( J! ]2 R+ t+ c( u  G/ n( XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ z6 N+ b" J9 b# I' b, h! W1 nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; x5 y4 N2 J4 m$ DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
! ?( q1 j% @9 o1 @, S8 J) }Entrust my love within your heart
% M) L" w6 [' Z: _/ QLove… just the word love
; ^) e3 P5 S1 o' ZWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 J1 G1 i+ O; i6 q/ HI want to confess that I love you,
! M. r) ?' y( v1 f% E$ I% H3 B9 ~; oBut I never did
. ?; }4 `$ P1 v" A  y0 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 S( A3 R1 ~; IIf today isn’t too late,
% `& p3 ?4 x/ v3 o% W" J# O, q0 N* AI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) J1 V  y( O0 k& U. KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 W8 h8 ]1 H( z9 g2 i8 t<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 u2 a5 }2 r6 M# v" |$ F$ D$ s5 E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ q( x* m' j6 l: Y; a; A7 `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 ~/ K+ R' W5 p. B6 H( @% r<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; @, C3 {: Z. c4 u0 }4 m6 Z% }5 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  v6 a" [2 W, ?: B* o8 q0 k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& H) a3 i5 \( J9 _' R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ Q# W. t# }5 Q1 `( t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; e" f9 x. K- b: O0 v<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- H3 J* d# Z# g) N8 h2 F! x8 K<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 L4 A1 C8 o3 {<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 V$ d0 K! X/ l7 w: m- d* z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% v& v! e# h1 H- l6 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ?9 m5 v& O8 G1 s+ d! o+ w. m- E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# _' L7 b. d6 ?1 {4 p) P. W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 u* b) }- k: [* W+ E; ]6 m! M  O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 W) R# H5 u& X: L' i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( N% J/ b/ T2 L! a7 ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; f! `% t: \" E6 w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 n8 l4 [$ s8 O0 _# w/ r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! z" D; l' K% X4 p" e<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 w( I% i  e& \9 A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 W# |, o1 C, t1 [: `# t+ ]<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ @5 C$ ~0 j) H! M; ]<P>But I never did </P>
& H! \+ X% w/ S<P>但我不会 </P>
) ~2 w% w. N- ^8 @<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; w4 ~- \9 X( ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 E3 m; i$ [* E* i5 I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' N8 E1 g4 t4 m& n/ R) S7 r1 M4 B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 @/ ^2 t0 c" x; b1 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( _6 f5 A+ z9 C! T9 I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# @1 j1 I! @# n& K( I1 V8 L 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* O  P4 q: C0 {/ {" F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# V' \0 x: ?$ {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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; K9 j& A9 V$ e7 `4 Q<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# [5 O  s$ h" i0 @0 G3 ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! f# i% t# q; {9 V<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>