【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
# x4 a; B- P' j2 |- LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# C9 Z8 ]  a; l: {, rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
% w  P# k3 k5 ]" c/ R6 RBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) Z& l; {. Z4 X. S( I* MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 m; ^/ ^6 }3 I+ |) ^7 JI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
9 g0 a0 m! T# S& b7 ^6 h9 UWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ _8 R; h' D4 R  }; Y7 dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 m3 F7 }' `( K* a8 R( l$ w" bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# [3 h3 y; G2 t0 L' ^& [, OIf today isn’t too late,
# ]- J% F& v1 K; Y- L  xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- Q- G* `6 _4 L* ^& N, X0 EWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ z1 e9 ~; f3 E+ o2 XI want to confess that I love you,
# c6 l% o6 K& q6 |- l/ zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 Y0 i5 S" z; P; \) b  p, HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
" [( k' Q) v( V- p& W4 ]Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) t$ x6 L% i6 m, \( Q3 Z* L1 ?<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ C- O% ~3 T3 @<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  |/ `) R: J/ i# |7 W  I" z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& p- M% Z8 y8 ~* }+ {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 ~% b9 d, R% h/ H; |<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ J! N# G3 c0 i% J! Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 A/ z% U2 V5 o; P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% b& x9 E9 s0 t3 F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 q, g0 \& |+ m- L) s7 v4 k) E5 y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# j- N( g! x+ d. K<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 I1 ]# Q# ?! e3 t- v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 F1 C+ Z/ Y# K<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
& ~: ?8 H. x% ~4 M2 I. ~% k/ C7 H2 s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
* L' |7 [. r6 l<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! ~; x! Y: i" ^0 N* ?6 e3 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 L% E" Y: y, N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ B5 _# |: o3 z$ y$ X( G7 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" E* S  t1 g# m7 Z5 P8 x+ Z8 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ B4 T( u2 ?. T* _6 u% u6 F2 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 X& l' I1 ^# G# N5 v3 Q8 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" S8 j$ E8 e9 R( ]<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% `  D" W8 y! l- Q# z3 d<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
8 F- t4 N. i$ `, Q9 d) R<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% ^, _% k- h1 V, j0 G7 b! J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) e3 h+ w+ \+ B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* Q9 F( Z9 ^4 \" ~<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! [8 A& W" Q3 O! D- h+ P<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. r( J& Z% [% _1 ^) y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; n+ }# Y" t& m, {. Z* d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 E7 W- }) H4 s) h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 y" ]" Z1 H% E  ?! v/ Z& C1 F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# c0 _5 v. L. ?0 q. d- A6 f3 ~<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# Q! V. t  H" c, f9 T) c+ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 |! y: Z+ R2 u( P8 x$ `; k<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& Z) h9 e. u; z这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 b1 Q, i0 Q9 T4 O* {<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>