【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
. @( m! T: g& e8 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 K( v  {# Y. G. }5 W" F, MFrom the first moment we met,
, f4 l, O6 \8 L9 S9 v4 I, B6 fI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
4 w$ Z! o% r; U6 GBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
- ^: D3 B( z- \/ FLove… just the word love
% o3 P: u2 `7 w/ m% hWhy is it so difficult to express?
$ c' @6 ~1 z' x' [( n4 `I want to confess that I love you,
0 ]2 \: m" k0 B4 M9 L$ V  }) z: RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 I2 i% y- B) {) V3 I. s3 Q# M$ \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) j8 [, s' b0 f  p" q4 |/ P  HI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 M$ ~$ |3 M6 n: A8 JEntrust my love within your heart
1 F% _; h0 x/ K( A. fLove… just the word love
5 }; M& A" t  k" R# M/ q# }  j4 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! G; h4 p& H/ Z" S. pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 p4 \( W; x! i) S* _3 m; h0 F2 LCan I entrust it to you?
+ g6 f  g4 X. |1 [: J! cEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
% y) r# p" V, _5 r% e2 qEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 b# e4 u: J8 O3 t/ I5 w6 J, M) P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ ~& p0 O) A# q, `0 D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
# f. p( Y! `4 f3 s<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. @8 o0 C$ `2 z: {! N/ O' v2 _! O<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 ^# a, H8 y2 \0 f. j+ f1 }( i<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* D* M. |* R( d- W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, k: A$ z5 H9 \; ]* A" P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  G% A8 z# C: {; h: P  H+ j<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  [* U+ m9 a; M$ [9 R# M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ k1 W# c- _8 Q8 n; J<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 r' i! }: B1 I3 U: h1 q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' H5 J0 q  Q* K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, }& U" Y/ z8 p$ K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' L2 ~* w% C. Q6 Q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 x; k+ q& I# F- f. F. `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( |9 ]1 P3 d  l& w7 W; n; O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
! g7 M0 k3 s! U) K1 V4 S& L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, L4 U$ W( w/ e; X. |/ N; D: e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- Z8 [) h  F3 a. g, _: {- S6 X7 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; Q% Q+ _* A. X<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. q( E3 c+ Y. E<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 m1 t6 Y( _0 v<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
& X5 I& W* x2 Y! b! X0 k+ s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
( G/ @/ P# d4 K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* X3 C) J6 `6 g+ s! \0 \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) Z" }; h$ |# ?+ j" J+ L& D: O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ D: g, j' e" [2 A& ~3 o) q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ U; X8 u0 Q& F5 J% b9 f<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% w" z5 q# `0 ^  o, i% a3 T* c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- \0 U2 M/ |9 Q  Z- m4 ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- v) c3 q+ s- B3 c- \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 h/ o) R- ]8 e" A! z( D这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>