【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% S, v5 ~2 T& s+ X, s0 N: q8 ^From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. y5 d. u6 D  L( b3 iWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 o, P. T+ |9 \: w; Z* ]5 gI want to confess that I love you,
$ b5 h4 f: C& F8 p# l5 ]But I never did
6 H& `- p, z1 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( v- S/ k6 {+ gCan I entrust it to you?
/ J" ~6 |- K8 x8 hEntrust my love within your heart
& G' v+ @+ O! o$ v6 V' ?Love… just the word love
8 s* M% _# o$ u: n6 {Why is it so difficult to express?
+ [7 D+ H8 `/ K! `! r, V. XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* H/ v1 ~/ n1 K! o1 _: j7 vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( [1 N! Z  D! Y* s: ]" x2 NCan I entrust it to you?
0 m. D, @2 Y. h. U- P7 M9 x3 T) i+ ~Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, T! ?9 W- l+ _, v9 c$ d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ C, q, D  w, @2 f( ?; p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 z$ t: Q) \' e; y: l0 g<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% ]) `. i% }4 M* b( L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# W3 M0 l! K( O) D# z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) U; ]" k' V' _) _& X$ T+ z! J<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' i" T- f8 U. N" v9 P" I8 a& r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) B! g/ K; Z/ s( z/ \2 J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& u  F( I6 N) [. o2 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( U/ b/ }4 V( K) |1 ^; [<P>但我不会</P>
6 W0 i5 \! x, L0 F5 q/ j5 Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' Y/ M  z$ e; u<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ x! ^( b1 e+ |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- u, q' h8 W- i: z1 M. T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. T6 y+ {5 X$ Z- Q1 ?; F<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! s# K( p! k8 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 r  d) h* n% k( o; r2 r. @, N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ u! r0 i# k. u& }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 }' S0 m3 x: A7 o0 Q7 r3 v<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 J) x, r5 N; M8 {) x6 Z. K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
  r# {+ |' u4 ^, K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 S5 ?) A. t! `$ C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) G3 c3 r; E: ^+ q" j; ^( m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( c3 a6 c/ ^/ r7 w  ~6 \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ `; ?2 M6 l- ^) Y! @, {$ }7 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 N! y# C& j# P' t0 y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
, V. c  I8 w  m; G<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! l- I- @% p4 X: q9 R' i" w# q6 }<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 A5 }, z% Y6 v  R/ Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; B. x+ y1 t/ E5 A  M1 y. x$ ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- A* t2 A5 O  `0 |; f- c5 F% k. G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
% L; E$ q9 }1 j" P, u" X: e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 f9 R' b! h( S5 u" J3 p% `9 H  Z<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* V  p" p7 t& S$ O, C3 A' V, c% ? 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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/ m4 _7 o3 a) Q, |0 w! S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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/ ^, p* O# x0 A, l8 b1 L2 r这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>