【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, A5 U: o  c3 @& z# K: C我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
: s" j. @  @3 XWe meet and talk everyday,
( D. Q6 q2 c1 U6 JBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
8 M9 s" v4 ]2 u  cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 C# }0 _; y( \# KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ Z# k5 b  P% D! _0 |If today isn’t too late,
, c/ l% Z  L" R7 u' z4 a( ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" `( l2 X- h2 h" u; _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 x# _* M1 u7 z% f: h& D8 s5 QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
% f( m. N5 {. y. wLove… just the word love
$ Y6 T: ?7 I* H, JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ v8 S$ @5 t# O& r! p' H# E$ VBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 W/ D, d5 E9 K$ p' G" q# p9 ?* jIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 j+ x; M; l) R; `3 Q/ J: sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 {" ^- \. f+ @; R/ [( ZEntrust my love within your heart
- H: W& a8 \; J) cCan I entrust it to you?
: Q# r/ g+ J$ J% `# j' `9 O- m" |Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

  a0 y- b5 _" _& z+ V  L4 @6 L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& v, Z8 t) o( F/ G6 y2 ^- p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 H" d6 W1 K0 @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' Z0 ?# p! ]+ `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 a! S9 e  ?. t" i1 |; b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 @& V; l; g, `3 ^0 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 ]7 c. b, R% v- _5 A* P+ `2 o<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ d* {: r3 `& J<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ k, _2 i. ~( \3 w<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 G9 ^' q$ D, k) ]* ?0 t2 [1 V<P>但我不会</P>
7 c3 U9 ]3 G* E$ z" j<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! j# n+ r1 Q/ i4 B% K6 g; N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' P. _+ `" y9 D0 u% l2 w' C) s<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
, j$ l# r) |) I2 c$ a/ r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 l0 H* b/ l. A6 A<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ E/ K; g% C4 s4 F) s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, d8 M/ b% p) y, S8 f( m4 \8 E5 Q/ m; Z) f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ J- l9 E+ y) n0 H<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: `* J- P/ E* K8 W4 _' r1 `0 k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& b4 N6 p* g  C- U6 z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# k0 k% P' U/ `<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- q' T5 y% |* C& a3 x<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) O/ y( t* D" Q, P4 v$ U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# R5 z. f* N, Y) U1 K  d- X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ [: S; R5 N7 w! C& e$ @& ^2 T- ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: G/ L* _- |; W' f4 o" A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 P4 i  ^4 }8 C( j6 A9 n) B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; X& q4 Q& ^! Q9 }" j% \/ a8 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# l* ^% d2 W4 X  B/ F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* u' N/ b, ~% }% n# X这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ d2 q% F, G" |: x$ O这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>