【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
" j- s! g# M0 P0 N1 I- \Making the sky glitter like gold,
1 w" I- l, d  S; PWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: i' o! x3 z4 U% h8 b# ?3 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
" n" {  w+ u9 @With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
, x7 M/ K& B" F3 ~# G: AI really want to know just how much you love me
9 N" j. j; _/ @+ T& \+ dI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
( g& E+ [% O6 Y& V$ GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# F. L! T) ~9 x. ~' VI regret not dying
! s9 C% L" Z: C5 B$ d/ e. O* P# VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 F) z5 _6 ~4 rWith such a tongue as yours,
, G: y% S9 U. y8 LYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' Z& L+ U4 S3 e7 w$ H7 l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 N/ n' q/ \6 v/ n5 W, i8 q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 s5 T8 ~7 L# H( ]; Q2 j. V1 p<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ e1 o. A: Q9 }# ~<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# W4 \5 `' h  r8 G& u  `- f3 R8 M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- o, H+ {" w  d% b! _<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
- Q6 E: G9 R% w<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 x; g; W* J  C2 X8 h, O0 \$ |' V: q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ t/ x* i7 z) M+ ?$ ^9 z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
4 }5 l3 ^- [, l/ F. a<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
0 i' w* \, n. _7 O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% D$ l6 c- |, Z+ V/ `+ E* }" s<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 ]/ g2 |9 w: _' t<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" z& X1 d5 ^+ @, x) B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' k/ H4 Y9 j& v. l" k7 F/ ~4 m0 C, h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; E+ B6 q) ~8 u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, _7 b* Y. _* W2 c' Q! y: |' B<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ Y% f( r7 R  x4 z6 w<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: U" [0 ~& t9 C<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; \* K; Z. E6 p% q3 q$ C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ V! u; T/ g/ w) p0 R<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: Q# f8 F+ d2 o: Y<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
) G4 P1 d- W( K: @% i2 w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. N# P$ [0 d6 z# z1 [4 O+ [, V* D. k<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! J4 `9 {7 u% ~$ T5 i8 s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  Q9 S$ h0 e  X2 e. P# z' i) K# _<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 v0 }& t3 E9 F3 h& h& O( Q5 B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ }: w, K8 ^2 w5 T2 a<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ D1 O3 @! T9 ?. L, m) L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 K- ^7 ^3 G" i$ {$ D  K  e, |<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ W1 {+ c& }1 G% s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% O$ V, c0 _3 i$ K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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