【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* }. Z, Y! A0 t( b$ u2 T; `: T/ tThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- @7 n$ ?6 q7 n# U9 wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 q3 j( A1 F; g3 a* {4 IThe sky is happy down to its soul
- |3 n& B2 T7 j2 r3 R4 ]4 e# b8 C8 DWith the moon kissing it every night
1 t2 a. |$ ]. ySeeing the sky content with its love
' W" F) s6 a$ TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 D& X, t0 b8 q) D$ {6 {# @. ^You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; F$ j, {% R4 A2 PI really want to know just how much you love me
: b: J- p* {, `9 Y+ C" z1 H) EI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* ^4 d0 W* q5 r% R5 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* i" C- ~; w' [' p2 C7 s" K$ P% }I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% W2 |0 K0 l3 j& E! t+ g. Q" a( gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
" Q, V! v0 m+ m$ tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( B9 |8 T0 ^' G! ^* g' m; z3 [If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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8 f. Q5 ^) w1 V- I" `9 V  F, E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
6 I1 z0 j* b2 Q7 J<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ `& C% a' c( F$ [- D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" z: [( a0 q0 H4 ?0 H* @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 v4 O2 A- o5 {+ d( f5 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  }! ~  a# o& ]( I7 Z4 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' |8 r) \0 A4 ]- i+ i  w* Q4 I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ \2 s& y: g: Z! ]' f$ M( v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
8 J/ V! c0 u9 U* @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) y, E1 h# z0 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
. k8 e$ M; |1 ]; x; w<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# U0 U1 _1 E4 \$ `<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; Q# G; O$ K4 r<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 D; ]  A3 B/ B- w( Z' R# V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. o0 y; ?8 _6 G- W/ p& u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ a& \( \  Q3 d9 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 t5 \9 a0 J' P! ]4 o6 }1 Z8 ^<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* K9 N% W: z. C2 O1 F/ ]7 ?7 t<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
2 z( `2 @7 q. w, ?& M9 v<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% l; @& _; y- e, ~<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- ]( }  v7 L6 w& P$ }- n8 L4 ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ B: f& k/ Q' |<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
8 `9 I6 a5 W9 d" x# p8 H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! Z) C- {( {6 f5 ~% N$ p- F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 y( g& y! Z$ B) r' i( z0 {0 H<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# @; z5 l2 ?4 z6 L+ ~" v/ M) X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 k3 ]& p6 T" q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' O( |0 X+ s2 u% E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 c, ?5 C5 O8 C& C<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  h$ \: @4 e3 R: a% v1 \2 ~我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! E& `$ o* ]) K9 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>