【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# c* b3 b" @; q, W2 WThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
0 `/ p* w. g5 c3 A& Y5 P. iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 U, X4 I; p- D6 M# S8 IThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 i$ {7 P# @7 ]1 D$ YWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
! U& N) p6 t* E- u% c0 C, L/ OIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- A- N; q+ u, C* M/ D' Q! I  SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 a: W0 i: K% q3 x. p* PI really want to know just how much you love me
( n7 \. s$ @: b( q  JI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
  U, N9 h- C9 U8 Q, d  [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) u, z- U7 f4 }/ c+ N5 r& qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 ]7 U! y$ W) [2 `7 f, iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. A0 E+ p5 U; Z% V7 O6 qI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. ^& E7 X& q0 j/ ^$ |9 h- P+ nWith such a tongue as yours,
5 B/ w7 A* R6 u' AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 P/ z$ F& _' I, J# E<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 W6 {8 {9 r% D& j2 I& x<P>月光闪亮 </P>
: F# z7 B) W- E, @% H6 A$ L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. a' R+ h, ?  s$ V) C<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; N* O3 l, H+ K6 C: ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ f2 j  C" Y& N( j( }: C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& x4 Z# U. M7 ]" V# A: m4 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 o' U2 [, ?3 x1 ?9 r# J' m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; q6 Q' f0 q9 z! M  p  |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
4 L3 b) N: i. i: n<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
, P, x. a2 d. m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
& a& l/ J( z- W, ]& b% R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* a$ r/ N- m! G0 V7 f# n) v3 x<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* H" P0 O, S* [1 ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
9 j# [5 `" }" L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
: s* R% Z# q) c' q- \<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& G( {8 u4 N. `2 s. E7 P$ v! E<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- q! D/ x/ d" b: ~<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
! F, s  g$ l* @* _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 C& s: T! ]: n7 B" T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 w" b+ u1 n) j- ?3 L. ]! g! W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- m" |: `; _6 _<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( C9 a3 G7 [, l<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( ^% C& @1 r, j+ o. Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 d$ {- l6 ~& d* z, W# |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. \* }) _3 Z  m& e8 i4 c' G6 o- C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 B* m$ @; l$ z& |<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

6 `0 g) Z! p1 M% ` 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( ^( w; ?2 t% H" C$ ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>