【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: E! X) u7 b5 g$ ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( n, t2 n* ~. XThe sky is happy down to its soul
& d4 h! a0 L! v# u' U% R7 C) ~With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; `& ^; {% w$ RNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
$ K- \7 h9 m) x/ rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. m4 P' y: C# _0 `With such a tongue as yours,
0 D0 A" V3 ?, P9 \* rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  Y& s& |$ D9 ~) C1 ^; eRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ i- j+ z' ~, m/ D- |6 `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
; \& `# C& p, ]$ |$ V/ L<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- o5 U; i' S2 e1 x; f2 a! i1 j$ l. C<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 q; `* Y8 u3 m* x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, {$ o# ^& K4 e, @<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" E6 Z9 a: P3 r; U" L, n+ O( Q  A9 Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ e: k1 i- K6 Q3 g/ q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- _+ U, I* e4 F* g! e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! p0 I" ]/ q& f4 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 h! ^8 W3 C5 y6 u6 [. g* m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% m4 n! c# \0 `3 o# d' c" ]<P>你无需担心</P>
. K. s" Z- H% K/ T2 \0 q# Y' I<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' }3 x. ~% j& c* b. S( M4 R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' P" A% p# G! u' M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 ]9 k. U9 x; s! B9 e* M% r$ t<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' s, V% d# K: B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
/ H0 A; H. K: r; O* e0 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 Y/ z) @% d+ C7 f8 [/ G<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
" l; w0 I2 {% Q& k7 u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! V6 T) [2 L5 ~/ M<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 _4 W1 x( K6 f4 d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% ]5 _+ Z5 A; {$ d<P>I only have one tongue </P>
# ~7 X0 k- L. p8 W0 t7 g9 R5 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: }6 f9 h% s1 t: K# L; e( S<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- m6 Z; q( O/ p8 k<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 X- z9 f( U1 \% E  t: R0 E<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 G; j( A! u/ [4 P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
$ ^) y& {5 |( _& w: L. y' c2 u<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ a& m3 `' |- U% g0 y9 q) ?) }<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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. i  ?+ {5 h5 J+ R9 ]! u) Q" r! x我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>