【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
; ^/ v" A' u! M+ p9 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; i9 o. W5 G* j0 P  d8 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
- G% W5 m" y+ G, |- K9 x, b) pThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ j, `7 G; N: C4 ]1 `+ I( vWith the moon kissing it every night
; j( w3 _$ X  `' USeeing the sky content with its love
7 e% A7 g  h$ {( T% ?  KIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
9 t; t5 T. j7 a8 g4 r( x7 jYou needn’t fear anything
6 _+ ^- w1 T0 W2 U% z$ PMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 Z7 L8 f* |7 l% @2 F  P+ F7 j% LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
9 N. S% o2 m  e7 u6 fI want so much to see inside your heart
# _  W2 Q7 @5 B4 P, \" i0 z7 o7 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
/ ?) b4 \7 _' H6 \Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 g- \4 ~! A; L1 mWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ Y: }1 O3 Y+ V1 j* }0 qIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, T+ W0 l, ?: \6 |. D- {) r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 V& ^; }. \9 F" r/ I<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, C  s+ i6 T% N; D0 P<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
/ T( n" b8 Y9 X$ x+ o3 B<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ |" A7 [; K; a0 u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. F7 O# `- u8 z! P% z<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
+ i& n, ]2 ?) Q1 z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 `- @# N$ r& Q! o" v<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 _$ Q9 A% Z7 R$ }9 L<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 A8 K. S- h% \9 L$ M$ [; L* F<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Q# }+ ?+ X, z; p% b: y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ a3 ?; _; K' D+ v6 Q. G# d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! P5 n. L+ u8 L$ l6 ]<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
; X9 F2 o* z# l. n0 z* J: ?<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! z( ?% R) l* c$ P4 N4 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) P/ ?. r7 Z& f: C& s% m<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 e9 U' B# Y, {* |<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- C9 w6 U: E; |$ D5 [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" W5 P$ ?/ E( r+ O7 m: T) j7 ]; \+ S<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
0 k* u4 T- _3 ]$ z4 {( G# }3 ?' Q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- }  y9 Q/ J4 P, ]& M" n) \% S  n& b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( Y3 k# N3 P4 e  U6 L" S; X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* Y: k" M/ O  B% U<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 U  Y' O. v5 y<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 a! ~6 d6 d3 d3 \" a! L: i  F<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 u: l3 E1 S+ `; C<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  H& a% k) Y0 X! |5 i/ W: ]. u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. J! C! Q- N/ t4 t5 \& b- \<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; |. ?2 u3 i' r+ H4 M- I! b' B& `<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 i. ]0 l: m6 {2 `3 @  S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
6 |" z" Z8 s! Q0 z7 k0 b8 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. }$ t6 ]. O& V+ ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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# Z- B0 J$ O, l! `) b我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>