【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# ?% `) h; k6 n' y4 U0 z; y0 q% {The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( t( W% r1 G$ l/ @0 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
# ~7 s& m& q3 m0 ?4 kThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 K3 ]$ y3 U( P) O, BSeeing the sky content with its love
7 q/ o2 S; I( ?It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# E" i2 Y' ?* g1 Q7 b, E2 D* V- W" bEvery other word you utter is love
7 R. q1 d/ e" E1 gI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) A; q. D3 T( Z$ l& C8 TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) g" w( x6 \/ i  g2 c2 [I want so much to see inside your heart
; ~$ u! l/ @8 \" I' h* II invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* l1 l5 h/ e( ^* fYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 M' |9 S6 F) n- t0 _. }- mI regret not dying
" Y6 v% e; _+ x! N! YI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 h! ?) Y& J& L7 SWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 {/ E  n4 F+ n# V9 XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& [3 i: c. ^% \8 J, I" K4 i<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( N( T6 u# @6 V6 A/ T' \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& w$ k) d6 X- M! H0 B; e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ Q1 D, s5 [, Q: V<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 C/ Y' Q9 h  C( z; ~, m<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: a1 w& E4 U1 B+ @% ^<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ p0 @/ f5 a0 e3 {. z6 M<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 [# X2 B6 L) p# }- P- C1 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 S& H: S  Y  @<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. o+ M9 p- t; V3 \6 V: D) ?9 P- ^<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# S7 H3 v8 ?; f/ V: ?9 a<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 |% t5 N) L& J4 b- a; d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ L9 ?# `& ?7 j- h) X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
0 R# k* o: I6 Y7 ~' D/ |) W7 m- z( B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! d0 a( }7 q% S( D$ S$ I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 i1 U# R4 o( d% |- R<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) s# H- C. C! m<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 p: t0 e! K/ S( A2 @% J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% O# D* Q0 l; c2 g9 }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ d, H. g2 ?$ E$ F- p: J<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- `$ {3 U: `; {<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, _( Y+ B5 w0 P( f' t) A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 [/ A, w3 I; n3 g/ w& f2 X<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ c: P# k4 f) o" m6 X+ d) t- p<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( F' b, M) V* K. k( t, K% i. F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' e  [1 H5 C$ b& ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" x1 g- Q6 ~( u9 L<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' }; Q% I: \( ~2 V<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

; E: r& I# t- u6 y/ u' S! p; t6 n我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ R# t$ C+ d4 T! n, `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>