【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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- I; {$ |; p' \  U1 J/ P$ @7 J歌词我附在后面。
, P  }0 v9 T9 k% nThe moonlight is shining brightly,
% d9 l% Q- @  g7 i. Y* dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 j8 J% @; R" f7 m! GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& s+ k' h" V* e) F; O4 rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 ]- k2 Q6 ~6 W0 ~+ y% R  A# c" sEvery other word you utter is love
4 [7 K  l' ~0 @& {/ CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
, P( [6 _; B8 \) l7 tCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" @$ d6 ~0 t& r6 \' @( \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, m& y' O, L) t) {3 w6 zI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
/ I& j% a2 O) o2 F9 n0 \I’m still filled with fear
8 K# E- L: j5 w' T: f3 u' UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 r( k- i; U8 tYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) g4 K+ o/ ^4 J9 @7 F3 NIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 x/ X  q( _: Q; G, F<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ \2 q" X9 \3 Z$ z8 o5 i<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ w+ }' I% P! |6 L4 e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' q1 b# w8 I% E3 g- s. U<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& K. l* ?) ?/ S& `0 a- ^/ @0 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" q, j, k# t9 K1 C+ a8 i: n1 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- [6 P" T( k7 w<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- R  p& T$ e, ]* m$ r<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 I! b' E' H& y9 G2 J# B<P>你无需担心</P>
+ w" ^3 s4 M! g+ _4 q* }<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  ?7 ^2 \6 V+ \3 {, C$ V<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
0 A( \" Q+ j6 ]8 P, k' G<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 B4 T% {, M% L, T! H<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 I, v& Z* d7 P/ B& o) s6 Q/ [<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
, ~. r  v, D0 W7 p& a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ G( J( k& g, q4 ~( e( r5 U9 b, Y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" L8 j: S4 ~4 Z<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( U( x" O: f% i* b( t1 h1 v<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) ^' X& P) u& v$ c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 `, B3 |4 i  }& R2 i. `  h& Q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 t, q$ _# T) e! u# m+ c<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 d; s' f: c0 H. d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ Z9 P; f9 t9 T( z, n; s- ?; x7 A<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
% p% L0 c/ k  r) H# E0 w<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 N- J4 E  h7 K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 L6 `) C* ~6 K) P% m1 S: Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
# \" y" B* F, i* ^% Z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" `2 V# b# f+ n( e% A( W0 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
8 B& S  j' y+ j7 M2 {<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( {6 w9 O% h; V: w! B<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 B/ c1 c* Z1 B# D0 K1 y+ m<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% c2 r) f1 d* ]: x) M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" F9 h5 ]1 p# ^$ F; I( ^<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" H* k  W& K  J: F: E+ g4 E$ d8 U0 o( M<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
5 U5 b5 M. V/ P% n: Z
0 e% V: D: e& e我请你剖开它
+ D" q: H( l, u- d, ~( x
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" G! O' y% D9 d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>