【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
/ e. B3 J1 T+ BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* t4 V) j+ q: N. O0 g9 X' j8 dMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% x0 f3 {7 ]3 M% y; PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
, L3 {. N: `3 Y4 LSeeing the sky content with its love
$ ~' o! N% a8 T5 ?' H, M  qIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
; T0 e+ Z' Z' r. E8 V) p4 fMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
! `2 `: N; P8 j& n+ r8 pI really want to know just how much you love me
3 ^$ W& D: X% x" O/ l2 h9 jI love you I love you with all my heart
- `2 Z, {: ^3 h& b9 v( E- I2 @: XNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) q0 U# P  p7 C6 t, I<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
8 R2 V; S' M! ~1 @8 ^% s<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 G* j; V0 c5 e/ s<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- A* z5 O3 _5 V) {; v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
- M- i8 E/ {0 }<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
" m" Y3 y1 A$ _9 q0 E* j<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 e& E! \, o) ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: z& }+ L9 r, V0 E, D<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% D' q* m' e5 X1 i; S/ ]& h<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- L8 K1 e) U2 P<P>你无需担心</P>
3 `1 ~/ n3 G$ e. P<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
3 f7 o9 [' A' K. }5 y) i! k( w: ~<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  f5 q4 t% t5 I! S6 T8 l<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 U- b. w' g( i$ h<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ ~; v( C6 E% N0 }8 _<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
( [* F$ Z- i8 n& T9 D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 \5 v5 Z5 @- \; t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
- f/ M( {: h- ?, U5 c! @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 n, w5 x5 D7 {9 W<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ @+ V9 t, L' x; c<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* L; U. k. f7 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
1 D! g/ K* p5 f, w# v<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, ?8 f5 f# }+ h+ Q+ U; X. _# A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
% o; Q! t- w9 h5 X<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 ], l1 f6 V5 V* n% |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 @* U" i  s* o<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 g( H& s5 ]% c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; [1 F" o5 C7 e- o- d; r0 T0 h<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 r5 @, b& h# J+ ?<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 K. o) ^7 V& D" w1 R: s; i+ b/ z) g- M<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>