【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
* o  F1 e5 Z4 ^When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; w+ [7 O, `& M" a' B* r5 RThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
3 x( F' h! t# [/ F# O5 `1 USeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, P) t  V( t9 [, \3 ~4 i! H9 LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 ]  U  ^- ]1 u0 o: N5 uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* t" T! S' p( C8 q$ F/ INothing can compare to my love
6 |8 ]9 A4 z5 g  V, @Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 t0 Y9 V- \: r: MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
2 r& b( }. S5 C, T5 R! z% zI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; u. [) e3 {$ n$ m4 z0 S" bI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, W1 V1 f  t; u4 ~$ lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
3 N: C( ~5 t& c: |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ {7 y. \' ]7 O! K8 X# E) iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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+ Q6 o: ^2 V/ y/ H: {9 _* k9 S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; k3 ^( I, \. @. v9 c$ t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 y6 P0 ^( P! g) B. Q7 u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 k" V) c  u( e5 H! n2 B: `1 E9 @<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
1 H+ r# O6 B% V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 N* b- F" Q/ A2 H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 h9 r- ?: O3 \$ X7 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* v% T% o6 a' x% f0 w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
) x7 E: z$ \4 Q" j<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* O2 P7 e: ^4 d' m$ }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
6 z8 o# ]7 m# G) Y' b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# n7 @1 i% L" h% m6 p8 `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; M& |' N  i9 R) r3 e9 R) K# P<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 g: `4 X# d; j& ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
% Y: w. A3 a1 W- e4 ^- v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. U1 J% B9 j3 t  T<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
5 s+ K4 i2 }) A$ X, I6 A5 \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 `/ A; @& X. n# T2 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# p7 d- ~* J9 N/ k4 G8 w3 f7 j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
5 z/ U% \; A! t6 x$ n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 N6 ~3 H, z+ s5 C% h, s<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, [3 ^# H. t8 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, d% H: M1 @; Q1 u<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 |/ h! T8 E  N2 P<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' p. C1 q8 w& I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* y% w  Y8 c# r8 N+ Y; [! n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 n- Z% S! ~' D6 Z<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, X( ?' L& w. L: W! o) o' x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>