【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 A8 B1 ?0 Y" q* E歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
' ^# q" U9 `# R. NWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% B% S+ H3 G, NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" L$ F# t# a8 ?( B# PSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ k: _2 e1 l$ Z9 S1 E8 uYou needn’t fear anything
! z4 Z. x- ^; s6 z; `: j6 ?! lMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- R" o: K' W5 t# ^& N" uEvery other word you utter is love
8 D- Z. M3 E5 u! \I really want to know just how much you love me
) Y) X! K1 n7 b8 F$ {' @; [* Z) qI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
- l3 t/ z9 R. rCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 X; k" U! L7 L6 D5 X4 N% NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( A( M/ T( Y% L7 F2 s% iI want so much to see inside your heart
8 i: l! `# L) |) x2 @3 ]- C  WI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: m2 s2 n& e  @' lI’m still filled with fear
% {& u0 S8 x$ e5 W: ?2 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" |# {4 [" }- n) `; mI regret not dying
/ b! H, C) e* H$ ?' m( [I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
- d0 i7 K) ^* ~( D4 b5 q  Q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ c- G7 f! r1 I1 U8 J- f: i' k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% _3 J% o, W; W( Z( h% i0 ]% T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 ~, w, w( e3 O, d4 W<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( V* U# D) _: x" k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 G0 m' G( J- _/ m- I1 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 H7 j5 r4 e8 h5 _( a; Q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  b  T# f' e* M5 Y6 S  i5 D3 b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ B6 X& V  L) J' ?2 y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: z# f7 u) _& Q% b<P>你无需担心</P>
, d6 c, i4 a  o2 f  Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
$ k4 y% a6 d# w. b; n2 p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 q) q2 K, s. z; G, O% l<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 O* S8 n4 O- S! z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ T1 a9 R8 V. e0 @* T* W9 Z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 r' x5 W  h, j/ D<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ [! G/ P. a% ?<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* d4 t3 C9 y( w( U+ `/ ~/ \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 ?6 B$ ^; Q( D$ _% `<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 x2 r8 G; D+ j<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; h( e$ Z" a! X. Z. \<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 i7 Q$ V5 h% l4 [: o! |3 E<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 a8 Q; t1 e6 t7 A8 `( N. V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 P( @9 Z3 B$ c) M: q9 U! |/ @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 ~0 L$ [. @$ u) Y% P4 f( I" P$ q<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 s9 s# L1 b: W+ d' n) n* b# z6 c<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 ?  C" u0 C( S* ^- _; u6 e+ ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  ^# e1 C' G6 ~2 ^<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 \: ^( l8 L5 ?& `4 W9 X6 }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ e) J1 P& ^6 M* f+ F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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$ g3 z3 b  k- l2 z1 {6 @- z9 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>