【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 u' o( ^2 f8 j% V- |1 ]8 c" `6 _歌词我附在后面。
( I, [  g: U+ pThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) G) `2 @  x6 k8 f/ B/ oThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ v* t$ i9 Q5 i4 w: H# y" SThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
6 Q6 b6 }) f! l7 C: U$ pSeeing the sky content with its love
+ i- S( e3 H$ d" L* d& U0 ~It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 w1 W6 B8 C0 zYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
. U/ E) e" s7 j4 g& Z+ h0 MEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
" y. N$ }7 H$ F! II love you I love you with all my heart
& @, p& U( ^# P' ZNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
8 T) L$ b9 {/ u8 z' ]* X) V4 P. `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( W5 i2 I* Z% F& w1 RI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 Y$ x) Q7 o, P! N1 w6 ?% b( OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ b- n+ u! s; A" q/ yI regret not dying
! o6 G1 `% }7 @% O" zI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) t7 d* P% M! p* s+ o) EYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 @+ E7 k7 p' p% wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) m& N1 [# q2 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) \* ]8 S9 O  b/ {2 U1 e9 t2 w<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! F5 @  e& E6 p& H5 d<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' o- R* P; p5 O9 d+ S1 j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% |  Z  N% O9 W, C' N0 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: i5 Q$ d: u# F& g5 l, b2 x$ V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
) z' d7 [8 u" L' g- T<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
1 M+ ~' c5 D6 k* I; @% ~- k<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 V" b6 `9 E% R4 K9 I<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# \' w* E2 [) R9 w# \+ Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. M+ |) R. ?! z. t+ K" D& i. i" x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ~$ ]6 z0 R7 H* N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 _$ h/ U" ?* i- ]2 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 A  J# f: f- B: ]5 Q; Q! r  d<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 m$ w: ^) M5 p& O. |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 e3 c3 v, ~: q  |! z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 r6 ?4 a) F; H/ C/ j' R<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
& w7 }( K0 i% x3 r0 [<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
$ ?$ F* `& ~0 c2 N- G<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 n1 w! f: E+ i  a; @( L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* B$ r8 l, M8 Y* B 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>