【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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1 `' M$ s, Y( }, |4 t1 W" p! |歌词我附在后面。
5 ~; n  j9 l% Y- }* qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
6 x9 Z+ g: `2 s4 b' i2 N! \9 ZMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 N; P. u1 p* D+ |1 Y5 V( GThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 j7 |$ Q8 J/ {9 r1 d! fWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
* `! S" j9 A, c  W- b) IIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
' T$ z' w! h) X  j9 \You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
4 L$ F/ b$ @, V: b" T/ j& AI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
9 x. K9 \0 M9 |4 m8 I/ MNothing can compare to my love
+ Z% O9 d- @; t8 ]1 g+ S& fCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( _9 m* A# u- [* `, O! OI want so much to see inside your heart
- N5 V8 g. Y2 D  I  mI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  \; K0 u1 S2 A8 mI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
( G  b( K4 j2 P0 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
. F5 [$ k" L& j4 i# x! nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' M$ A" U/ ?5 i" W- B% ORambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 L( Q6 \' S0 ^# T- J<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 ]) W2 d. w8 i* ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 p- w4 P8 b9 U& q; z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
8 r$ V- N; }; x8 X/ b4 j: H<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* D2 M( s' y4 V  P( K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- |. r7 {. s9 F* V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  C: Z1 x; L# z/ R- K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
. y9 C6 u4 R' B' [<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! x. p7 n0 X& s3 J0 v<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
- G) D  m# b. S, f( Y<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 \$ y  M$ X3 b" t. x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 T2 j% T+ h/ }5 ]4 D<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' @* j2 D: x  {7 u8 s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, h4 c9 {7 R' ~' a* }<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 a# V6 p5 S1 }- a* H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ V. P; }6 _. F1 D<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 C' D6 n* m4 Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
& c$ K6 A- E2 w! z8 W2 s<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: n: q% P: c% |/ {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 {$ Q/ ~, I: c" e+ {) g<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ S% y0 W$ {. Q/ \! e" V9 o3 o# B<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% {4 l# b* H2 O2 N$ g<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' A& M* O0 Z: v- w<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& J: z2 e  B+ y7 s' j, M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% A9 Y$ F( r, `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 k3 q. k$ p9 G3 U<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! x  l2 m! i2 T& h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>