【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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- N, L8 B0 `2 D2 n; z- j歌词我附在后面。
4 z+ m9 j1 h$ a/ X* ]6 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
( R2 X3 t$ R5 P' e9 t; Q+ zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 n  h2 y/ D+ G4 v$ D2 c2 xThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 l, B- D- n( M* XThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 o) i* m* L( Q1 {* ~+ YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 j8 m& N8 Q6 vYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
# t8 V. T$ z8 l- s: d7 Z/ ^I really want to know just how much you love me
# x/ R" C) ~7 K; S! u* h3 yI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& J0 x+ u% x6 K" c2 a' dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ k0 {& ^$ x0 I9 i& z' G% F* \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; }6 m) T, D: }I want so much to see inside your heart
# I) R; X/ r2 n/ Y% B4 l8 VI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" h3 ?6 V  t/ s5 ^* xI regret not dying
/ e! F6 `% z$ ?6 F4 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 x3 z* P8 ^5 F2 ~0 x% Q# uWith such a tongue as yours,
* O% D1 d4 i3 d5 c' ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 R  s" O+ I  zIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 ~! V3 ^& r* ?, T/ z. `<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ]9 C6 h  c4 [  L) @" z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 t! f7 x( M$ b. a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, C5 T! _1 Z" ?6 G" H. C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
( j' b0 j% c' R  R: o5 W<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& o- v* G4 Y5 V& Y6 n<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: H6 i. |  p) u- Y- M! u# v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
, O! u" S2 U+ d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 K0 K0 i$ d& Y/ |+ I; f- n5 r0 }<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 Z: c9 B  Z, F7 I6 f  i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) n' ?& i  u5 k# ]) v1 }" l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 U$ O; [4 T# Q0 ~<P>你无需担心</P>
( {- K. P: g0 A% ^  l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 P! u1 }$ H- ?5 z9 {# l+ s& e<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 Q; C3 x, A/ u% Z0 {3 O3 H5 v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  F  R  w) p- a& [<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' u7 b" O! O9 Y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' I& e" K. R; X% ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& g- |) @) p7 e0 s& S<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 L- A$ g  `" D: J1 t<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 p/ @. k( G1 m1 {<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 z- K& j, s' R: |6 M4 O2 I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
5 x% E1 B8 F$ ~( M  @, k. t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 F" c4 o- u: |& c/ p<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 Y+ B; n0 r- k0 k. V<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# I6 T3 m( c% ?& G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
6 }' R" j8 _/ x) Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& g- _# p8 b. l<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
: q/ G7 R8 Z! }1 m0 T; F. s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
$ t+ g# V6 @0 i3 R" L: P3 F* f7 z: q  w<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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3 S- J+ s& o& {, k" y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>