【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" x5 I3 w* I  v6 {: t歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
. w. d" \1 j+ U. _' JMaking the sky glitter like gold,
- C* T& v# K9 GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 p" h! w* f  {: OThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* W$ e5 Y- {: k  E/ J2 h! mThe sky is happy down to its soul
# s7 T3 r2 W3 Q8 h4 Q3 Y0 FWith the moon kissing it every night
* U; V$ g+ a2 q" wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 |+ N( p+ F, P! W2 h' u7 {2 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
" h% C: n5 s$ y$ ?  n0 g0 H  o; a2 bI really want to know just how much you love me
" [! _  {6 k( w7 ^+ DI love you I love you with all my heart
1 `: C5 v- W0 S0 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: ^  m2 [$ _! x. [: E/ S# dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ k) d+ l+ G) q( rI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ m2 ~) k8 [: b8 f" cI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" c/ d/ {9 z' {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
- t3 v4 u/ A: e. ]3 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* G( l1 K( x; N, v9 E/ B$ l, pRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
& X/ h9 t, ^  o# t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& e0 o/ F: K2 o<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) ?2 U% L+ J0 B# j<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ l0 v9 ~; o" H2 ?<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- c$ a5 [$ j. H1 T7 I% o7 G8 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 ]; O% X; o# H8 f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
7 K2 X$ ?' \5 r4 W<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* M# Z- s, }* a1 s& O<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 I# m+ g9 G! O& |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; D1 W# |4 y7 W6 a$ `% k; q8 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
1 M+ _% @& W% w* A( a3 K& L% K<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
+ Z; _0 A) }7 w5 _8 }, i<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- t9 ~2 f; w& ]( Y' c! z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  e1 \; G8 p( c/ {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) @* d+ W7 e6 F9 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. F' G. ]. ^  i; m4 k<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
' B, v; S  P( z5 d0 l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# i6 F4 ~; o. A+ N0 C<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; s+ t; B) h) N# S+ c; _<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
2 G. O( @0 o1 c5 H3 ^<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 s. m; m' e0 b# J' ]<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
9 d) b+ ^0 g! M0 ~9 Z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 I! \: C; c5 ^$ m! z5 \<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 R+ i2 W) m5 q# E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  s- ]2 {# ?0 S$ W( j/ I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# D* W- G& j5 A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* }; C* n. G. n8 @) q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
" C6 ]1 c& O. @8 O8 e* Q& n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

. E" f* Y, B: i- B' v# Z) K我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 m7 O  n. E% j2 i( |<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>