【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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# ?1 g) P3 @* I- w$ c歌词我附在后面。
; S9 R; H3 z$ O& v, A4 u" Y3 @The moonlight is shining brightly,
4 b8 {- ~. l: F3 m0 {" E* RMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 ?/ `8 M8 f$ x# u5 oThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
8 b5 b, W+ d# U3 ~Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 J% W, N  J5 v) m+ i$ ^, i" P0 |% HYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
, a( }; m2 h0 c6 fEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- N* V; A2 n; G  ~  v5 B  eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) O/ L( u/ D5 H+ G2 {5 w" l1 B4 `, S8 SI want so much to see inside your heart
: T" a( S; i/ ^* x1 ^5 eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
* x' N% `+ n7 ]& P7 xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
# c5 C2 `9 l& J* F, D7 ~4 X$ wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 a) X% I& p* {8 ?) R<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 T0 ^# @+ d% C7 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
; ]0 b% V) f/ X0 C4 o! ^' w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
: D4 r/ M1 D/ i9 R- f<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 _: l1 q* |- F- D/ T6 x+ k<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
( }* \/ X. {) g7 f# @  Y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" I8 T( h; d* C  H1 W) M+ M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 `) r/ c$ U- w+ e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% p' j! D3 T7 R<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 `8 F0 m5 H9 A: W' u1 g* _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* o3 z. k3 E2 R7 X: ]. a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
% m6 [2 Y: c0 m<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- N" |1 T6 T1 k3 @( ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" u' K+ T" `$ T( o7 G/ {# k+ m<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 b" G+ ]% q* i/ }3 }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 e  D" g' q+ e4 s) T  V<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# K' L! J# e2 H6 f- Z' E<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- p% H; B$ P: j1 d<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& ?: z" V4 R4 W; t0 w0 [5 v7 n<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 L5 K8 N5 i6 {9 v# B6 P<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( u7 S$ V2 i/ |  v3 k* P0 M; g1 J<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 F; m2 ?+ r7 _* z# u+ k<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; m8 \* S2 O: @. a<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- ?2 V$ m# V* i3 ~3 e<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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  P  x7 n2 \" {& V* {我请你剖开它

" i6 @* s( q& d  C# p0 L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>