【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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+ n3 i0 D+ f$ R' EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
1 E3 H. M; c: o" QMaking the sky glitter like gold,
) p3 S5 b% k9 f2 w8 R4 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 I- d& q8 c1 c9 _' PWith the moon kissing it every night
& B- d- ]$ P0 |7 SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( L  ?. ~- Z3 G8 J# ZYou needn’t fear anything
8 Z' p6 P  n) n8 eMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* w" I' y1 R. _0 ~5 TNothing can compare to my love
, \2 Y4 v' |# g2 S7 w  lCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 {- k9 e! D. lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 I6 u% q. K- S8 }/ ]8 O: q5 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
! Z) x. O( K# h- A- u$ D- C/ `I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! l* e0 g: |$ A+ ]* a5 c5 h3 O) b' `I’m still filled with fear
, E  i* w& |+ e% v# k, |1 `$ [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
% _! X$ j% W: XI regret not dying
7 U% [+ h6 z) j% N  f% II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. `+ C6 R0 m, C) G7 p' xWith such a tongue as yours,
7 A$ I5 b5 R3 n0 L$ ?/ wYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ E' g0 u( [2 GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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* m4 U% V: N3 D" O/ e% M& d$ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  [( ?/ o: ~. X( O4 M: g<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, S0 c; \: v* Z  k, B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( J/ c) [" H7 ?% c3 G! n* p0 r<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. b4 E1 t6 D% v1 l4 n* k<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 w  m2 m! J% S$ r4 s+ p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
0 f8 r/ J! c% }5 b5 n: L0 V  A$ b( Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
. x+ w! j! b2 Z4 E" {5 g# Q0 k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" `: x4 h* R& ?6 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 l* k: R' K; t6 ]<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: k+ G4 Z' F9 w0 y+ Q3 X2 y<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  d8 n" Q5 k' k7 _) U<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' w2 T0 h7 N) C- e% z3 L8 b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* U- W4 ^  v) ~6 Z+ i5 p<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 b* e5 L; Z' o2 x+ E% N& T; X& Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
. b& J( S; H* ~) {7 T2 R<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 o7 e1 ~4 v9 k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  P' E. M% D7 L4 V7 Y  u+ r! n( \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
9 a' h  G/ O" `. r" R) k<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* {$ W3 @5 P. T% p2 Q3 ^<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. s0 z+ p5 \1 I0 x<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 |& e* Z! w6 d' `+ }& K# ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
3 W& V  c4 d5 C$ ?4 o8 E# z" r2 f  @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 {( Z1 e! X) o  L; l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" {* w! o4 @) ]3 t2 c  _<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 n& J3 d% a: g+ o1 P+ e8 H; O& [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
4 Z( n$ P" ~% t& \1 o9 a' w; j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 _- m8 N9 Z! {( Q  E<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 F: a1 m/ ^: v2 }5 S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& X/ P3 Z! z  }+ q' o; X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>