【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, {( t% k% @' [8 R  n- I歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* d3 w" x1 r* E$ {8 z) G+ H/ CMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
0 w) Q  s- u& z& T; x$ }The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ K' ]2 m4 e) Z3 B% S* vWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
& U# ^/ _# k$ Z1 Z; m/ aYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 s" G; y4 X3 b9 j6 r/ z1 `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, b6 y# Y/ u7 ^Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 i4 T0 H5 D( H. W: w0 p; [0 [I regret not dying
( s2 x7 N# T1 z7 D) e- R* I* A  VI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
3 @5 N" |' q8 V% ^/ l  I* C# W1 QWith such a tongue as yours,
/ C9 p+ X( ]/ z& `. \% D7 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
1 {$ E( O# a2 w7 p" V: h' y5 X<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' a6 ]+ T) }2 `1 k<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 F+ r( t8 u7 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 J1 J6 j& Z1 P2 F8 G<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; n' x; X8 J& z) ?<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
5 r1 F8 @' @  i# D; M<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 t) s. G8 L( T6 [8 m' d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 @; O+ @, J% c+ g$ V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) m+ F. y, I" I; M1 J<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 v" l* j# R7 F<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 `: P, @; `& C( t( c<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 K! }3 y( j, b# f( ?, D+ k) j; J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 n7 m+ ?; b1 t9 U- k<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
  h& R! E* q$ q! J/ q# P2 |<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: y! W' a9 Y9 R8 C' k6 P& F& }+ x, F<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) F+ z' g% j" W$ l, o6 G& n<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
7 n% n+ f0 D( x$ I/ I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" P* d  t3 q& b' S) c, L; [<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( f# P/ m: v8 M- l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- s6 P7 s$ @. b; d$ [4 }! b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 r( I* F2 l+ K9 o& e: k1 `<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ]/ Q% d- H$ g5 f9 C+ a* N<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 o  C% y8 H6 z; K+ z) y6 N# D; ]4 X/ z: ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 i( }, T9 y3 \! V0 G<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- N6 H* `; V& X5 q6 @; ?* @' R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 G) ?" S0 d" d- c 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>