【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 u; L: Q2 K8 }" N, |歌词我附在后面。
4 h1 U; [- ~# D9 _2 x: s3 S: XThe moonlight is shining brightly,
. I0 B7 x' Y" F, v; l- }! \Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 d, x- a1 p5 U5 I; bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
+ ?/ x6 G+ ]. _7 q4 k7 MThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: b( G, R# s8 c* @& SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
4 z* P4 m& D! L$ Z: _, a. hEvery other word you utter is love
- j( e8 @8 D& O" q8 TI really want to know just how much you love me
' w9 i& A( m: K" `I love you I love you with all my heart
9 c# j3 T! o7 e/ {0 N4 x( YNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 j2 n  a- ~) d9 f$ \! J3 ?- _The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 _6 r6 A4 D! q* L5 l+ DI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 W  m/ @, w" \5 a; O6 Q% [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" d1 D5 f# D# `6 d7 O# E  dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 s6 c* {, ^3 v4 h- H4 b7 bWith such a tongue as yours,
) N4 [& o( b7 B' Q) k9 r4 XYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 |$ H$ V) A* A* p8 C: y# \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
3 ^" D% |6 p+ b: h. `Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- ~' X. Q- r9 v$ J8 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" g( G. [% J! a# H+ h<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 \7 u6 T  R( h; K6 }<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
" T2 ~9 m/ n  ^' B1 s3 m2 |, w<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. `! p8 S1 m: n6 }' V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 p4 u3 q" J3 _+ S4 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 w9 z* k9 S; w& B0 {0 V( v1 X  v<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; T* V  q8 j/ @2 G' y, N<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% j4 m" R6 i6 f! L9 O% p' ~<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
- U: X+ k8 {/ N" r& C  a4 O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 y: @) Y$ h! n  {<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' o) ^" G) F+ V% X8 M<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ Q% A" c; f4 y7 t# w<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* t; l; m! m9 V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! J( o, U- n: j1 d% s# Q- r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
% r$ f$ h2 W, p  f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ M& m: y5 ]( Z# D# k/ l<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
7 ^7 P1 W) S8 h+ ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
& B- P! v0 l9 S3 x: F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ d/ ^$ A) w( y/ K5 p5 W9 c<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; c) _! N& q# F6 l. @<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
3 E  m. d5 U; B' s2 m# L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* M1 i/ p6 o8 O0 ]( }4 F4 x<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 i4 ~. T) L9 u  D8 t<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& @/ B  c8 L& r$ q2 w) p<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
# g( N/ p' d, r+ U% }- ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" |2 a) G: E/ u' e( k7 i3 k: _<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
7 E' S0 X$ P4 e2 L$ H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, b1 v  I- J9 N<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 F' g5 c& z) `4 N7 b' q8 r, y3 S我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 J/ E1 _' Q0 E5 ]<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>