【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* k+ ]$ n) E+ H# T" H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
- `8 p  i$ ]7 s5 m, W  PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' V; C( g' G& a" }* ~% Z* G7 J- |" q2 NThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% Z; A7 ]; D* _Seeing the sky content with its love
7 R! H; H" k' EIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
% g% p; I" V# \You needn’t fear anything
5 [  V) T- n8 p& z+ Z9 w4 c0 y7 dMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 k8 l" v, _, P6 ?8 V0 OI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) q. b2 a2 i9 p. P  \I’m still filled with fear
  t" F9 M$ \0 a9 @: ?; P! mYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
. n5 B3 o% j/ L, a& E) G6 AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
% ^3 e1 `6 p; F( MYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ [. U/ x! g7 IRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 {( [3 ]# G6 P4 \2 K" a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
; }2 |8 T' c% C& ~( \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* R3 _& n3 C4 ]+ J& T<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 H1 m2 M: S3 Q6 T+ ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* [6 t7 r3 c7 c# O# m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- s9 h) z7 \8 j. b  w<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  |+ `' v. O) T( b+ K<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
: s# H  B1 p+ _" y) ^) J; X: a2 V<P>你无需担心</P>
  a3 ]7 P% m0 Y$ Y<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
- D0 O5 ~  }0 ]4 u# q* f, R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
3 z3 P6 I) P: A! q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) S& }8 @/ k  Y7 W6 T<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
4 H2 }' ?. v1 W1 \- N& \% j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
$ }/ N+ ~3 }" I9 t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
2 M4 p* e* m3 C) H9 r7 N<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 Z0 M0 P6 m% ?) N) p<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) M# l8 ~) i5 O! [<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: L" d5 |5 P. Z1 Y+ I7 [% }0 W2 a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- n, X7 J" S5 ^+ C" \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. o: v5 A0 B1 @( }$ h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
* w2 I. `. Z1 e! B! a$ T4 s<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 n* g9 m3 ^: \: K* h4 w  p<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* b  z4 e& A. B# y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 m$ ~% O& l3 c3 [<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
' j0 d- i! P4 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ r2 s. O# j# @2 b" T, k1 Y9 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 e' p: i+ Y9 c0 r2 s+ c5 \1 S2 r我请你剖开它
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" n# }# @. E1 J) { 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) X' g# v! `; Y. B4 G4 `<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>