【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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6 A' [' x: I0 @( R8 x- n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
' U) z- v) }( N1 \: `5 v2 h5 {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  ]/ x. b0 k$ [% }# n  f# s8 {You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
+ l8 p) E6 D  YI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 H% G: b, \/ K" ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
, I& d& I, P/ V; m1 @: eI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
. ]. e. u' M9 Q; OI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) B" A1 y2 k5 A: v+ X, d! XI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' E0 y; k2 v5 T+ S! I$ }2 {' sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% o% F9 B& w0 F! k2 @5 K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  u. k' X6 b, X) z6 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ H. V: U1 e# n4 l. t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ a+ M; u$ s  J7 G. e! R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 W! |- n0 z4 t. M9 L$ m. c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 }. S, i$ A0 o: ^2 H<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" z* B! O7 g7 ]& _& J7 u<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' ]* @/ D" w7 @; }; b# M7 E9 q7 u<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ {2 N7 E  u6 p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
. l' O9 v, R* ^0 G) r, y<P>你无需担心</P>
( P6 ]0 q% }  f' ^- @* p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' ?" X$ m/ Z# u5 y  x<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  J) u4 O. G* y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 o; t) J' ^  R# V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# s# Y3 P+ z. u- Z<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 m, u, t- S# t( r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
) A: v' j9 L% T# ~3 `3 r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ X1 s. {3 Y8 Q, q<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- f* s2 e" k  M<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
* [( o& f; x7 }+ o<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ }" E* B0 L4 d" ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( `$ N0 c+ y$ ~; \' {" A( b6 J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 B2 m" i2 x8 {4 i& D* S<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
% e! s, V  v+ k3 B& M* u/ [! Q+ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 F2 h( I) K( s  ]  C4 [<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
9 ^2 s9 l7 g) e7 }/ u# y/ w<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& E0 U  S% q9 P  H0 a8 j) q7 Y<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" [% p  E1 ^& L& Q! ^; x* R' s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>