【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; m8 O: [9 ]! x6 fMaking the sky glitter like gold,
  i3 f: \  o5 [/ W4 e6 s; D; {! W* ^4 qWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 y5 e. _% A, }2 J- Q( pWith the moon kissing it every night
3 ]. B$ p8 s+ M) D2 s) ?Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
+ u9 O% [+ L) R" }5 ^, NYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 }2 r) K4 o$ d" G) {* j- yEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; J& I* M. v% u5 UThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
' m7 J3 V5 U; D8 V# V! b; nI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
* M8 F; ?* n# }4 H( x0 s9 J" S2 dYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' J3 B! [( O% }, I4 K0 PI regret not dying
# L- Z$ y/ c- W) Y6 ]2 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& e( m% q( u# \" _( Y- {! [. uYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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! Q- h; [; h, h<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 _! ?$ O; y( ~6 e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% j$ M* _5 c% A+ V  W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' |, E3 w- f5 a& O$ A8 B<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
# E5 R( ^9 t, s: H7 r5 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 u, w6 |2 k( {2 W1 Y* [( G; d: k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 O6 G: ^0 o( C7 K, y1 Z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& S5 ?; C2 p8 ?( J$ l9 C" d9 O<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( d* ^* e. @1 }8 X, b; d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) r2 g. I0 A4 a+ ?4 r8 `7 U4 Y5 O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; A9 i: [) w2 @) K* f6 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
9 L5 t, I7 |: L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
2 ], n7 B  x4 r* V<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* ~6 K6 w1 W' h3 L7 ~- W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 M5 s$ Q, }# i8 s  R: Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- i, w$ a4 j; Z/ [<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' J( h6 g5 H3 G- ]& z% t/ |<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% \8 p' I) s. M/ o! o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. J; U( a+ w$ m/ w2 m<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; i! W" a. v: f<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ z$ D& ~# d# o5 {( s- X; G* y<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
) p5 Y8 E! y9 K( V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 y( _9 q1 V, E4 H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. @; j2 |( x8 }. k" G) s) h) W3 T<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, B% [) j0 r3 v+ Q4 _4 Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
+ q( y1 D) g7 D' R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) ~$ t* @% g1 u" t! a, J% n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' n' a  F8 g' d* U" M/ q( `# b  }<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ G8 `+ }& f# ?  L3 |3 ?4 D<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

: f+ T- A; G( }6 y7 R+ h9 T 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. K1 S) z0 }# V" G( @<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>