【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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( V. _, O, `, M/ T8 n歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& S( y& e+ a* `3 f2 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& _3 Y/ W/ Y# N* sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
) y9 \3 ~( Q2 j3 E: g) T' gSeeing the sky content with its love
" P) g/ m& Z: x+ _  l# M) Z/ S- O0 pIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
# H5 z* S  B  o  H9 b+ g+ TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
( V/ H' O5 w4 \, {; L6 u# M9 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 D9 a; X* W; x& I+ l4 mI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 ]* ]9 B! }* HI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
  C/ p: Q, |% fWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 L( _2 _" U3 z% H1 pIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" z3 }1 P( r, j# g1 Z7 VRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% B( A5 Z* s- e6 H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' {0 U: }0 u  K4 n+ a% Z5 D7 Q( Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: b8 c3 I8 f1 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. g4 @# T6 h. s6 B$ e9 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; X1 @+ ^, D  _$ U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 O( V# Z% ]6 _- Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 N: m, P" e: U% y$ R<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  H( K  {9 [( T& q. E0 \<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( E, m* ]  v$ [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 B6 c4 [. \# t0 A  p<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: _- e) ~& _/ j: j) c# g<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
7 |0 U# W8 d- D6 z- P0 B0 Y9 i4 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& J- {* P  {6 h  F3 d1 I3 f7 [( v<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
# w# ]1 g, ^& k0 F* H9 j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 @% ~! h- H; z# ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- e- x5 J& Y1 ?5 ~6 c5 e! R2 o<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ w3 j7 X9 g2 Q! |/ t) |5 i<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 [7 P6 z( \) o) g. Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ j7 l% |! D; q<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
  S4 p, u- C4 Z) i0 D6 x5 c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 J% B$ k. c' o* I& M! p& c) d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 D7 R) R; R1 ], o+ N; D& j<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) j& B8 U# k, B<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 q) [" @& J; e4 l, n4 D<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, A! h1 d& F& U. r3 B4 A<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 {0 \1 ~& W6 x0 ]0 B4 A* R) b- \* p, C<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
* S* _* }2 G  u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
  x" S! s/ {* X' u/ c' P' i<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 y* {/ k/ ?& k* W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
& q; h5 `4 w, g9 Z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 Y3 U" n# P6 A, i- \0 t<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 P  e5 ?+ }2 G( k; O2 h6 Z' H1 ]: @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
5 ^+ N6 H1 w: a$ e4 ?1 [0 P, J  ^<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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0 e% ~* r/ U) {) D, M我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 h% ]+ b5 `4 F/ H  g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>