【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
% S9 U+ h! L5 o' AMaking the sky glitter like gold,
6 j4 @# h2 @  L6 H% c9 `- \. xWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 `% x1 e; ~9 I  z: j5 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
# a" V2 J' ], t) i% }0 Y3 \- vSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 Z1 O3 B& {$ XMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
* K6 ]$ K5 S" E+ Q. KI really want to know just how much you love me
7 Z5 z( x. B( }3 t" E  D) x2 dI love you I love you with all my heart
/ D8 N/ w* w- C0 Q  f7 gNothing can compare to my love
. G: b8 v+ m" P" HCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 q8 ]9 y3 U5 K# n$ DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ K1 v' y, J6 xI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, p" M6 f# B2 d7 z- z4 EWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

0 t& u9 S$ Q9 q6 E8 W<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
- e) [9 F* @# C, k0 Q: B<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) o  m4 X2 q. f( J<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ T7 r$ o! c- r: E3 H) m' s# [<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; W- t$ Y% D) ?- C& U* q<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
& n; c; G9 I. P) l9 G0 C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# n2 _4 n0 M6 {" W0 r/ i9 T: [<P>你无需担心</P>
+ `: Z% f) g  b' f, E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
: i# h  j% n( j& }5 l<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 T7 `6 o0 ^3 Q. ^# j<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
/ n+ @4 {* {' F" T# z<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 u# D, g0 ^4 J( B: D1 |# v/ I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& e8 S, Z/ |, W: ~<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, r) L4 x! k0 v% e* C5 s<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
- l& J: Q( n/ P( c& J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 y" [$ G! x' i% o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* S/ E; X. z! _8 A' O<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
0 ^) H5 |6 _8 I% Q<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
: A- `) _* l; M$ ~( h, f' B* r<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. E6 }  b+ z& K: H4 q, h* c& q<P>I regret not dying</P>
" B  n6 \6 B% h5 g9 F<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ E  s. Y, u8 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- l9 v  l. Z  C6 ~<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 u& G" {" @/ ~( c# u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# J7 p  e* `. a. o$ b  U, B8 ?/ I  h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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' X% r! y& B7 M* p1 ?0 A. [" O 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- B$ [  I" ~$ h& ~* Z' F<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>