【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) K" ~5 {* b5 C) J9 G1 E歌词我附在后面。
: d0 t/ u: e+ X4 d- AThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 {5 ~+ l% w  [) [: _5 `2 bWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% C' N1 R- L; m$ AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: ^; z& V) k7 W6 X$ FYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! X6 Y! z9 Z7 P3 c# r7 {2 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
& X2 ~3 ?' j5 c) sCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 y& u$ p2 r; ~& o. hI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 l' Y; x7 ]2 UI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
7 l8 [+ F; X. h( s$ B+ r% UI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ A0 V# ~7 s5 n$ L/ FWith such a tongue as yours,
% J% J6 ?8 e' b: n( G: ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
4 f4 a, Y( v: `! [- |" ~If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* l1 J( P9 d) E( d3 r) s( }  J, C; V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
" k' y! ~% Q; R. l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- F- E, q2 t: O" _5 m<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 b" P- J3 \0 V, F# x<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ o0 p9 x' S0 c& U6 P. Q<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% `) B% u% H  u$ k; p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ N, e, u) {+ s$ g' U! \. x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# C  ^8 `: j/ H$ B/ p8 y<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 _5 j: Q; V/ Y4 n2 ^7 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
! K4 {9 \! W! |0 l' R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
! b7 v) R$ z2 E<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% r! q9 `8 Y- x<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  X6 `0 C& q- n) f5 w4 t<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: o6 ]: v" n- L3 n9 w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 i1 O  E6 l" W. R- O/ Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
  H$ b) @& r+ o  A% f+ y, H" s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
6 j: m0 X9 O" H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! J# y& P, N; ~+ g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. H( h% Q; q5 }9 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
9 M6 X6 D5 Y- G" t# m<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
- [2 z" x8 v3 w* J! V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 }6 Z5 g7 [5 s! m7 L% I* o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  B/ ?5 n3 q0 R" i' M& o<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
/ s. s& r* ^" z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- g. ?- X6 Y4 b8 j" w<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, Y* L, ^5 y$ R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: @& B$ D$ B: K) e& X我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 s  S- K3 n1 u9 ~+ I: @6 Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>