【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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' E7 {2 r. j$ {/ `+ z歌词我附在后面。
& s& Y' c- K# _) l2 T; C8 EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; U5 }% e2 B; D( yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) Z* p9 c' [9 Z5 L( I2 HThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
: ?1 F- ~0 _( fIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
( x( F: S. g, ^9 J: P4 DYou needn’t fear anything
$ V/ r: y6 N4 `' g0 m6 v6 `" Z! NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% r0 i4 ?# h3 tEvery other word you utter is love
( z" o# G! d, aI really want to know just how much you love me
: P9 m( c- [4 T2 J4 }# d  x; h7 BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ S$ z3 B5 u& d6 _+ X1 x8 y: R0 uI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
# d  I% C0 k# _# I% dWith such a tongue as yours,
1 P  b: }$ x7 Z7 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& d, }- ^7 s) v5 L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# E1 P1 ~7 c% {. R/ f<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
3 C! v0 T1 T, c/ C' \7 n. w& f/ d<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: A4 g6 [/ j* |0 b1 o) s: p3 O, E$ U<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
; z' K, P# ~7 E, M/ s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 C" T. q3 c. x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ w( ]' d) X0 D<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 o0 f" e* o# P* O$ p! v1 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- N2 i1 x. M& P, D3 ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# J9 D( t7 u$ U, G. V<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; V' U- n9 o$ i/ }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ [8 Q  P. K6 S7 b$ a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' B$ o4 m; r" m. {$ A# Q2 z  U$ l" `: K<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
! z0 w, }7 R6 ^' \2 P2 j3 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" n7 n' s9 n" l3 E$ N& i<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! F, k2 j% W3 y: W' L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
; O; _. y" L/ D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
' A% }  D* e7 D! b, r" a<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: G. a1 a1 X, A0 m; u5 ]<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 l, `8 V; ?& E% _; {9 X<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
8 K% X! E* g( p: A& R. A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 b2 N5 l' {8 z' {; I5 D, [2 v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- l; ]! f, _8 |0 @0 P& e* [9 q7 M<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. T+ Q% n: T5 t, H1 o: @$ R<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 B) b1 j8 K2 p: N% y5 P<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 V6 \0 W3 `! w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
/ p9 [. n. J6 B& f0 K' t+ n( a<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" Q+ [, u$ X" D* u<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% F9 P6 A+ }" t& W3 G7 \8 L<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 W& n9 g/ n2 G9 O9 k; E6 a<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 v3 V1 O- h* _( G+ D我请你剖开它

7 I  _3 k6 x- U$ W4 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>