【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; [: G4 X/ s+ C' iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ _) n! T3 U8 @" p$ U0 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
- q2 g: `; W& l( D% ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 E2 \+ U! ^4 {8 k( W2 ]/ dThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
7 c* X9 [0 ^8 x7 E% H3 DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% C4 E; H( n3 d7 z: z+ R; }I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 d3 _. R# O4 E: |* uWith such a tongue as yours,
' e' M/ ]( R4 t" R9 H+ \Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; Y" U& F) E0 s. H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% B$ K/ U5 ]/ E( J2 c<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" X9 G% P0 z: m  u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ G# b5 i7 p! v! G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ x! H: g, H7 \" P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; L8 l- U3 o0 U7 l# I8 n/ T<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" W- V" }! {! z+ S1 ?4 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' r3 n9 J% H4 M! C) ~: _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 k. R3 v& i+ ^<P>你无需担心</P>
; m8 D4 b# H9 O- f3 d' f<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 o8 U7 O8 k9 h( {- o<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" ~; ?* S  O5 d: m- T) {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, c& T6 Q0 n* u6 [5 l/ c" f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
' }3 {; C$ o8 W! q- N<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, X) ]! K' g- I6 _& }1 ~2 s6 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. a" {, Z0 F* L: b( d<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% Q, F8 L/ \+ S  b; {9 D# L<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
$ P. y$ m& F1 d2 u' d) P/ H1 u3 ?<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 i8 q& K( Y) f5 w6 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: I4 m6 s, Q# p! a- f% P% v* O$ A' T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
- ]( O# M3 o8 [9 E' X4 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ o$ j- n1 D) {( Q* D3 w<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. [' N+ |6 P! [<P>I only have one tongue </P>
0 e/ \( z9 e+ {) ?9 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ }% y" @' H4 U7 O9 S<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
3 d) g% ]0 A- G3 N. B<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 a# y( ^, t; S: d<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% O0 w& {* }; n. @& i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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9 x% a1 T8 S3 C8 `6 x$ E我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>