【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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: T$ g1 z4 T, Y' `0 s歌词我附在后面。
) z9 F( }6 K. a1 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
+ K$ q+ o3 \) H$ s6 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 m0 f" M9 l, n3 @The sky is happy down to its soul
- F0 f5 S  |6 Q* Z9 s6 a8 }! `4 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ `8 ?2 |+ g0 |. \7 _0 YYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
" v! F0 T$ c5 w- ^$ CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; Z( p$ p( n0 g% F  Y+ ZThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) [: c8 v' T' D) ~0 p, b- KI want so much to see inside your heart
/ X) d2 `# s( lI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 |  U) C- \- N' `- O1 q# ~I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 d7 m8 D* h; G* {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  Z6 f' B/ W4 @- M. u& lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
  N9 Z5 T2 y% b+ ?$ c4 LIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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( Z  t- u& V1 ?2 h7 {<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 U# H$ ^$ G1 S( u1 d6 k6 v! {1 M9 d  _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 P+ Z$ L, U2 U" y5 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: s3 t% @$ g2 N; D- [) W4 n<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 G4 ^/ W* N" F! M" d: \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& J3 }6 @! O6 R% f: s, Z3 [, ~' G<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 \! v) k6 B$ s2 s. P1 T<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 J. v2 \, b0 l3 n' m+ q) a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  `) y3 ]) V- p1 ~% B4 W+ j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: K' w  S* k/ @4 B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
6 K) f0 L; X. `2 W5 x9 r6 F<P>你无需担心</P>
& m# c6 ]9 R# j* |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) d: H  h9 c. u4 I2 R& b/ E# q<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! p% r% ~2 E/ }5 [" e<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
  H2 J& R% Z: e* s- u3 K6 K9 Q<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
5 j. A- ~; l2 c( H% }. n; k7 v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 z3 q/ z, Y' d/ U& a5 q7 b$ u  @<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; P  L' V3 e9 Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" o- }. q# A, r3 Y# J<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& d0 k# M; D2 O" c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- k6 n  K. L/ t<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ N; b- ]! ?$ L' p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
1 h' Z3 C' O$ }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 u# j9 S" v: p" ?& R. j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( y0 h& D! r! e; z/ T2 C+ B0 r' S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>