【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 |' q$ M( n/ E" b3 r4 Q$ mThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ L$ n) M8 @7 q/ t( G/ J* b, }Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- j; @; H4 H# [1 d& SYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& l1 ~/ A# ~) T* Q9 ~Every other word you utter is love
, n. Y6 \' T. i3 ?; CI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 G! j" D- [( d; S' hI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* N; n  T; r: h" ~8 i! {I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
. a3 i  t( o9 D+ w( \With such a tongue as yours,
6 R7 J0 ^: L% \. w4 P- YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 m4 g; u# }4 a! x8 Z  G! Y! wRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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2 W) y- }5 N7 p, t& k5 H6 y% x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ z- U4 M1 w: y' W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
8 N/ X3 Z' `' L/ G8 R' w. K<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, A# P6 O+ `2 N0 o; W<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 j6 L) |( c2 {% Y8 u% q. B' J<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
( a, L% w% e, \$ c5 B6 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
, Q3 B# H9 n  T3 T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ R3 m1 k  Z7 w0 ]0 \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
1 U, Y6 R  V* ?8 ~1 z<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 c/ E/ G  I$ v3 B  N  d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, k6 l& z1 ?. q9 d<P>你无需担心</P>
& _8 }! G) X3 v1 ~' r4 m<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% X3 J" ^% @0 t& U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
" Y# ?9 D! V( X1 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
0 S# E$ ^9 }1 y$ N<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
7 y: z# T4 _4 {  `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
& b) \9 p+ G, O, x3 _- {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 c8 [. O: l6 Z2 ^, z  X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
0 i- K2 i3 t# Z, n& Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
+ [! y' A! _6 _! I4 v1 f/ t# j+ c<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) M5 `1 b! d0 d" j4 Y<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ b( x3 G0 g: P. X7 X1 P- S! U) A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ Z& h+ ?1 ~5 b/ N& T4 w: ~4 x<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
' q/ e: h# i1 q- Z$ w<P>I regret not dying</P>
; {6 ~$ r* a- o2 i& H& |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
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<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
( e7 g) r, s, J# `8 q  G<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
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8 W( P7 O( f6 S( S<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! l# z5 i9 O$ X1 m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ h! S) W; m2 e<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>