【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
' Y3 N0 o  b9 v4 `The moonlight is shining brightly,
9 E9 `  U8 a2 @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 s: X6 z  a5 i! L1 I: b: P& l; ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* J1 T* s  x% a7 o, b# T5 T' qWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 |: R" S, t) E3 @5 zYou needn’t fear anything
3 i8 Z- V7 r$ T, z2 wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 f( R: e- u6 R& FI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
. h5 M3 I4 H% bCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
* I3 k2 W2 C% X9 C. LThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 x4 K. b7 o4 D+ w/ eI’m still filled with fear
' T; `1 [  s; J: l" q! l  zYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, [# A- l3 }2 H! lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 `5 ^7 n4 k1 ?If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: A  m1 J5 k7 A) L* a8 F# u4 HRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( T* f1 \0 T& p8 g- t<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( r& L: j7 {6 N+ f2 Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 }* [: S" T* ~<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Y8 l. ^# l5 z  f0 M<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ {7 ?2 s; W3 A  z* T" e' S7 k: m<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
7 @$ U  y$ J' }7 m; K2 D" z% R4 e<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# r. A9 [5 z- @+ \* ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 Z2 K! F# k5 P3 K3 B. l<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ O; @- C3 A0 L/ w4 @& y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  {& w0 m1 q! Q, q/ U, m1 l  r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
7 Y0 w+ W, G3 k! {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; i* Z: V0 F( M, z7 T5 o<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: t7 F1 u0 _$ z) i# G/ }<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
$ X" R2 F3 f( h* P) j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 Z/ t. [! ~1 n- I" M<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( m) c" {4 k  C: e# ^$ q& F) p  L1 I<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! X, Q* J4 R2 A. t7 c4 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
9 H( `- v6 f2 v$ V$ H0 e  j( e( q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 V4 {  z7 `# \<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 }+ L. H( C% W$ I6 R" Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  T9 \0 m# t' W& b1 A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- n$ e/ w( Y+ D* M) M<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 c* C0 T8 c: n, x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 ]; j9 L& n7 k, u6 |<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
$ Q1 E! p- }) J' d) B4 r% v<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 b' Q1 c' E# V5 E0 }# m1 {<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
$ y$ n8 a! M8 d( C& z7 p  U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" _. u: a* ], d9 A- x<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* g8 V0 W$ r: a6 a; r. y) I<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 m1 R& ]" V- W" X/ V7 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

7 P1 Q3 N: B8 k) n7 ]我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>