【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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/ C# X% r* C2 Z% J# ?9 c8 w$ N歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
! D: Y& U' g$ \: y! kMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 v" c" `' j+ l' d0 x  j- fWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' g+ f) v" m- @7 W4 ^- Z. nThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 ]1 J! h7 w5 `( m" s" r8 P/ kWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
7 y+ m# ]% H( ]' N2 y3 H' {2 V+ wI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! Y. D' O% X3 r6 G. ^8 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. ]/ j+ q( r+ ?5 W7 h! A4 KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
& E! O( U/ i6 Q" T3 ~; lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
  E( G( p( {' R( g# Y% f: \I regret not dying
7 c# A0 c+ J4 k/ `- X, R6 d, fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
/ J& [7 p! O  l7 Y. q. ?Your speech can’t even keep up with it
1 t) T; O  I! {. D3 jIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
0 b# ]9 a: w, e- sRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ B+ c9 I8 h9 e  W<P>月光闪亮 </P>
& q, V0 }8 z2 Z# V; |2 n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
2 y! J; v9 Q, u<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' H: f2 M& a2 G% }' k<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% L1 J1 ?8 ^0 M6 z" Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) X5 o% m6 H0 \% t+ t! a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* m$ I* k1 ]" k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. o" k  I: a2 d% ~6 {% J" ^<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! U+ C/ O5 c& _- r: O+ M. E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& {% l: U! j+ U0 T; R  \. V<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
/ |& _1 C8 F$ k5 y  P<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, {8 h( b  F4 g$ _<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 m& h' y# |( B! C( c<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 D8 [' v1 @: ~6 C$ r8 S, N, z0 w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 u9 i) m. j# W$ N& y2 h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, I& j2 L. j. T1 r: X1 h1 i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 T  y. H7 S, {) [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% V6 l% I/ M# L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
& G' h6 n5 p. @- e: T<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
+ j9 B2 n4 X% m1 t4 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" V1 [# a6 t/ W3 W<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 ~* \9 a( F9 p: T# K  F5 @<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
7 t6 V0 E$ e8 G# e; a( Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 F5 X. @: B& H6 O+ H1 c<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
" z% \8 A! ]5 e! B<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 U5 y1 W' Y; V<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>