【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% `7 {" P* S: G3 r# H歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
* K( S' w0 s: r9 P: i! IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
6 I8 l$ c8 Q6 ?. b2 t( m8 ZThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
% ]  M9 \/ ~( F1 J& g/ jSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. k8 \0 B8 K& A; g* N8 j/ _You needn’t fear anything
* ], i  g2 C& H$ h: _! `My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
$ [2 T0 C1 W9 h% Q* _Every other word you utter is love
+ j! D. `8 D) ]  Q/ `$ X+ i$ F0 p' {, Q7 dI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
2 z* W3 |5 U, o% g: rNothing can compare to my love
3 X4 I2 V4 V5 g8 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
2 `: ]: n) ^1 d& z2 _5 t7 C1 u; {2 eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) l( s1 l. |! J/ _" `  B; s1 ]I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' J: c8 Q  }, }( o+ TI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
5 f2 C' g( C4 ]" F" {3 FIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

- g3 [, V+ k4 D, @8 H% R; N2 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
; ^4 I" }: u$ L9 Q$ ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
5 B# q# |3 R4 O0 a% w/ x3 ^# l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' {, @' U& h( P% @: }) A9 I<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
: L! h/ V0 d% D9 g; z! d<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
; r& K& N! q2 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 K( @3 \8 Q  Q+ e<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: [" p, ]4 q" c, ]9 `5 B7 ~7 J6 J<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" N( i* |: p5 P$ h  M<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' D8 W  p% R8 z. Y# Z$ U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ d8 ?' b5 E8 G( L+ l. V% w% s: n<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ G! y. ?# `) f- Z" ^: B3 v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
' z: b, Z# `7 f/ z, a<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
6 S2 b* ^8 t6 i; w8 ~; K5 i" a<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
# D  C& q( K5 ?6 `<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  w% F! Q0 c. O: E# t: M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& J" q) y# N4 l+ l. D% Y3 j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 t. x; l" l0 ^/ b8 ?<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 [: L2 L; |8 S* p+ @8 Q# ]<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- W+ {' q. j# u$ l( v3 _* g<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 A8 R' b0 ^) A, ~* u) n<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
: I) |0 w) e; U$ a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( ~$ z$ D, J4 N<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
, \. R, K% v+ c5 ~& D$ x2 K0 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 W* q2 d) C" K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, U* X1 \( r  ~7 S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  \; C( E5 I- D; K( U' t. ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: w3 E6 t* D' S9 G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ P9 v& Q- V1 G<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
- d9 r9 o* L3 `; j* k5 a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 r' a( K1 N; Z/ U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ K9 D1 M4 w! [; [<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>