【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
+ P: }8 @; e- N7 F/ `The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
& ?# U, U* K' h0 s+ r- TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 x+ [/ d2 z! N9 N1 {0 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 Y) O2 n2 R+ u( y0 C* lThe sky is happy down to its soul
  m/ W; a2 L4 t/ x' CWith the moon kissing it every night
- Y4 h- Z0 K/ s' S0 C, R6 wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 z& _2 P; J0 K2 uYou needn’t fear anything
7 c; D0 A$ }8 {; Y0 B$ sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& x" t2 y4 O4 O0 P5 I, }/ ?. {/ vI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
0 ^, [) H6 A) S. g( c0 h2 dI’m still filled with fear
% L) m% w5 O6 E1 o2 q; ]4 c' L# SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- V8 w( f. M' j+ B  g6 y3 ^I regret not dying
2 E% `) V1 C7 y9 E. AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- \4 E! E- U- J% X6 FWith such a tongue as yours,
* z) d9 H! `) d4 [7 K3 Q. pYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
! e3 N, \+ y8 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
# z" P  n8 m2 A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
' _3 X5 n" ?4 P) s<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 P5 D7 `% @& N8 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 n6 j, D! Y  r" X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
, J$ E6 f9 P7 A0 x$ r& K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ r# p* _6 v9 t4 r1 U<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' I5 W: E: G7 j. |3 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 Q' G9 J9 j  G3 f<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 K2 E' C! L9 C0 f1 {8 d4 c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ E- M/ J+ L9 c$ U0 w; a) o( M<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& g4 l' V: ~; Z: \; ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 B3 c3 g4 i' @4 g, f  A<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
' E& _/ Y: u& |8 Z$ }4 z5 C' X1 N* q9 f# x<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
3 k' z2 r% P( ?" v5 X8 \$ ^<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 j! J; p) G4 E& o4 g<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
7 N6 S1 W! G. k2 a<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
$ O' v+ o* D7 A) d# y8 v<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; W. l" g4 e) ?, y: u# c<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 e' M  o1 S2 T: ?' c( f7 d<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 d1 @- n5 ~; ~  h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ _6 m0 q+ N5 w2 S: X/ P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
' R# Z* e) ^4 s/ |<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 C( w% l  \! j4 O$ R# R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ b, G0 y3 p- N. }8 B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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/ K1 m" F8 C7 _* @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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