【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# b  }4 D- b1 G1 i6 b/ w7 iThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 K& P5 q; i, ]: O4 |, nThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 a5 c& h) c* m% U% {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& Y* B, j: o. a4 e* B; a  @Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ X9 v6 h# L2 q+ f! ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; ~5 p$ w- P: b: K& `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; v* q' J  T# T  C/ kI’m still filled with fear
1 N/ G6 h7 D, C1 L5 GYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. S* d5 X+ S  a& q9 j7 EI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
1 f0 w3 Z  _; @5 _% j8 S: N0 CYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ a" u& [$ ^( a+ i. D3 @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 X" P4 o3 J: R( b<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# X( v! r4 A" ?( |2 Z. a1 N8 o9 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  {* I$ p0 a1 m<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 E# c& y& [$ \1 {4 I<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 I- t) a9 x$ S$ d* ^, h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
9 e4 C4 b* r  z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
0 j- b1 d) z8 W0 s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 |& F) T0 q9 Y2 m8 g% [<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 N, f1 e, c* Z<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ u  ^1 h. h- x4 b<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
7 E$ {5 i. v' y, f4 y$ ]# K/ @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' @7 G; ^  z! {7 i1 R9 Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ ^% w0 {& k+ i7 C' x<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; {3 g2 t) p) Z8 |3 }<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- A* h- N0 V" ]7 s<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: Y2 R$ L+ r2 ?<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" L4 w/ I# @' Y$ n4 e& K<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. a8 E  s: J0 J<P>I regret not dying</P>
& e6 b4 @  U% G+ ]3 Q" X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
& G* W& j4 ~/ \! Q<P>I only have one tongue </P>
( _" F& F; z9 M- c3 h+ C* B<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
' L# \% ~  Q" z: ?1 m0 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) b/ [  z! e3 j' A$ Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
2 Y* i. U; T. a% H1 J$ V$ ^( f: z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" l3 z# P2 V# R<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 I9 B  |/ U- v% h<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. [5 o6 M) u9 x' Z- ^# R<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
$ V% [' y& P) h& f8 p<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 A: a5 o, ~, s* X. N我请你剖开它
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: Q1 ~- D/ B9 Q4 B4 k$ ^; u 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>