【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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! V- J4 ], g1 a, v歌词我附在后面。
& p. C8 C) L) i  E, Q% MThe moonlight is shining brightly,
$ A2 C/ _( t3 U9 b+ w) p$ ?" ?& IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
0 x8 I& e* y* u) _0 @5 ^5 p2 R' oWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
. R) c1 P: q1 [, a& o& m1 {. \9 KNothing can compare to my love
& L; p) @* Z  S9 A9 o2 BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 d: J4 X+ X5 ]% Z3 y+ O; E/ yThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
% G1 v0 ~  n6 h, Y9 C2 XI want so much to see inside your heart
0 o. v0 p# p+ e0 ~I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: B% Q% D( U8 W+ D) {7 rI’m still filled with fear
) c6 @* N+ n  E# ^1 BYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 t+ s" C. C/ w' `With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 Q1 l  B4 Y: \$ ^/ nRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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& F- S/ T' A( n! u. M6 }5 p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! @$ c1 M* g8 v2 o/ _4 K<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; H( k5 {0 c  w  k  T! }0 r<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& _7 z- Z+ b# O5 j( e9 F# J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  I. Y7 F& O$ p<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  D) I% }/ u( d. |' c9 b<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, T3 r; ?; I3 B2 t, F1 z) S1 Y<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% R/ e. D4 |. X$ ~5 Q7 d<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
4 v8 P( ~) \0 n: C! p<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: G# O8 r$ ?" \% _3 x<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
. r: n0 ?% m; b/ K- N7 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 ]/ p7 _" M& P3 c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 X5 C8 }+ k1 g6 F& ^<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ q2 T( A& [0 `* ?" D. n, ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 \  J) |2 e  s; _. Y, y; X# Q9 m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) c4 S" w' d0 t$ x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
* l  o' A) m  }5 |, ]<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
) Y6 j4 ]: J0 L  g& Q* ^" V4 y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
  _- n6 i( N2 a$ M! M+ Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: \) f1 J7 S: R2 F  T4 ?9 z9 Y<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! ]) \2 I# w4 u9 A0 Z9 V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- O( U$ J" C' k1 P! P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
8 v) D2 O3 H) w5 j: d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 K- s! l) j( ?! s0 Z9 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>