【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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2 _2 T. c4 i0 i2 V0 Z% h2 X. T; C我想我從未表露出
( ~- u( ?' Q" q4 p+ @/ a$ a深藏在我心底的那句
2 Q3 u, X/ K  z$ g) ^我愛你  

From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
你已經深深的佔領了
我的心

* P7 w, W: W# m. wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart

縱然朝夕相處
. e6 G0 H5 k$ i3 Y' a還是不能肯定你的心意
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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 P; o8 e+ l6 D+ f6 c' j! lI would probably know how you feel
/ `% d3 D9 q7 A/ o3 ^* H凝視著你的眼
" h. ~. K( I( f& b- v! T搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
你的心情

$ e1 _, C0 M9 o. s7 }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
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& A9 }( [# i( Y2 u愛  簡單的一句愛
; C5 f$ T: t# m; H) N為什麼
1 y$ c' o8 l! N9 w如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
) y) m* U* @% D* b9 m* X' _But I never did

愛你 想要告訴你
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏
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If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

( z8 b# a  G% P) f1 GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

+ k8 O$ `0 d$ |7 ]& X9 f5 _不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

+ ]. W5 y1 c9 t' I+ iCan I entrust it to you?
+ t. t/ u1 |: @- l' {: KEntrust my love within your heart
  \! ^) s0 ]: v( I可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡

Love… just the word love
4 T# m9 g- O$ G: JWhy is it so difficult to express?
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愛  簡單一句愛
! |% `! ]2 l: F8 \6 B0 i, N( Q為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
- w* q1 m1 P; [* Z) o5 mBut I never did
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# ]# s4 c2 y! @* z5 G6 |愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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. Y) g: K4 ~4 b也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
( t3 F9 B3 \+ c9 a1 c8 S我心底的秘密

3 l' e5 l& ~9 N3 h+ t7 ]" Q" jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

. j+ h, r, h9 [2 s不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
4 z, C1 ]2 G; D$ z& hEntrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
收在你心裡
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Can I entrust it to you?
: E) g; A& j  R+ l# [# X- ]Entrust my love within your heart

可否讓我托付給你?
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对唱曲参赛译稿
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 V3 w2 u, e% x3 N) IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
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$ b" u$ A& i' s' C2 {1 `. K+ i皎潔月光下
  E" v$ ?0 G5 z1 q& ^天空金銀閃爍
凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& L* X2 K2 |2 O" IThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love

: R* t& b3 Y1 B, h( s: n月光映在我的眼底
- o; w$ w1 [) `1 W( X月夜陪著我一起沉醉
月光輕吻著夜幕
, U) h+ A& W5 ]$ d3 H& e! b星空充滿著歡樂
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It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
, n0 Z* T; u6 E3 G3 L* j害怕我們的愛
終將逝去

You needn’t fear anything
7 l/ I5 M8 w9 G+ {$ wMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
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& [8 e8 t2 R& m( ~4 j  I你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
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你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少
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0 U0 [$ R; A5 w# i& a% M( pI love you I love you with all my heart
* o0 M! J7 G( J- k5 VNothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

7 B( Y. T$ g" M0 o! `Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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) Z% m9 f7 }; B% z* A0 Y+ `能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

9 d4 S; W# L- s: FThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' a9 b3 u. n0 K9 B9 p9 S整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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I invite you to rip it out
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
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' {  |6 b3 }" c2 N! J我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
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我依然滿心憂鬱
你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語
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I regret not dying
I only have one tongue
It’s nothing close to 100,000
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* R4 i% O% ^" s6 h  ]可惜我未能以死證明
% b2 {8 M; j* C; V6 }6 C) _7 W我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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, J. ]1 w6 W0 ~( PWith such a tongue as yours,
2 M, ~' n, ]# z9 F% g6 _% J& YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
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這樣一張巧舌
" L+ x  W; r" b( ~8 M你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
如果我真有千百張口
# V& B/ {' h) I$ ~- r我將對你訴說
6 k) i7 Z+ o3 a- @  j# f/ R$ |千萬個心思

& A# I2 x" J% h6 sRambling on about a thousand words of love

訴說千萬個
0 Z6 P' O8 b' v: W1 L, v愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

" y; U# j8 n  J$ M/ X' a是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒